Wednesday, December 7, 2011

MALICE.




The deceptive
Smile, cannot hide the
Malice in words.

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12 comments:

  1. ShreyaDecember 7, 2011 at 12:16 PM

    Nice haiku. n lovely picture :)

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  2. SiliDecember 7, 2011 at 1:06 PM

    So true!

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  3. Manisha BhatiaDecember 7, 2011 at 1:59 PM

    Some pearls....nice..:)

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  4. RimlyDecember 7, 2011 at 2:07 PM

    So true!

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  5. JennyDecember 7, 2011 at 3:08 PM

    Wow. Haikus are such an art form. And you appear to be quite the artist!

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  6. MotifsDecember 7, 2011 at 5:23 PM

    WOW!!!

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  7. G-ManDecember 7, 2011 at 5:38 PM

    Janu...
    Loved your Haiku...
    But you are missing a few syllables

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  8. Roy DurhamDecember 7, 2011 at 5:39 PM

    good one i like it god bless

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  9. UnknownDecember 7, 2011 at 6:01 PM

    Nice thought! But I feel that lines should be rearranged for more impact.
    -PORTIA

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  10. JANUDecember 7, 2011 at 8:07 PM

    Thank you everyone....I have not fully understood the techniques of writing a Haiku...these are my sincere attempts.

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  11. Brian MillerDecember 8, 2011 at 1:31 AM

    nope, changing the packaging does little to change what is inside....nice haiku

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  12. AnonymousDecember 8, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    Stunning! Wow!

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