Friday, May 11, 2012

LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT.







To each her own;
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder..
And I fell in love...at the first sight.
He has no business being so cute
So hot and downright tempting.
Love his handsomeness...
So fit and sleek...
The redness of his color...I like
Haven't had a ride,
Yet, I fantasize...running my hands over him
Will I be nervous when I take the wheel?
Oh! I know I will enjoy...cos
This is one hell-of-a machine
I want to possess.


For - dverse Poets Pub - Machine Dreams

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37 comments:

  1. Leah GriffithMay 11, 2012 at 8:57 PM

    I love your poem! It makes me want to own him too! He's hot!!

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    1. JANUMay 11, 2012 at 9:02 PM

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    2. JANUMay 11, 2012 at 9:05 PM

      Have loved the Beetle since I was young...yes, he is hot! Thanks Leah.

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  2. UnknownMay 11, 2012 at 9:09 PM

    Its really hot...i too love it a lot...just loved the way u have described it :)

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  3. Brian MillerMay 11, 2012 at 9:11 PM

    nice...i always wanted a bug growing up...i wanted mine to be bright orange...ha....that would def be a fun ride...smiles.

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    1. JANUMay 11, 2012 at 9:13 PM

      Bug ...in any color is fine. Thanks Brian.

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  4. ChazinatorMay 11, 2012 at 9:59 PM

    I totally understand. I thought of getting a VW recently when I was looking around. I settled on a used Taurus with only 45k miles. The picture of yours is kinda cute I must say. :)

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  5. Tarang SinhaMay 11, 2012 at 10:25 PM

    Excellent take on the prompt! Very nice:)

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  6. The PoetMay 11, 2012 at 10:41 PM

    Dear Nargis,
    I see you haven't lost your creative touch (smile). Love the color, but I'm a red Cadillac kind of man. Nicely expressed!
    Thanks for sharing.

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    1. JANUMay 12, 2012 at 8:18 AM

      Dear Raj..
      There's always a voice that says I could have done better. Well, I can say this is just a warm up.
      Red is my all time fav.
      Thanks.

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    2. The PoetMay 13, 2012 at 8:25 AM

      My sweet Nargis,
      You are blessed in spirit, heart and creativity. Anything you write is a masterpiece in my eyes (smile). Nice to see you back. Take care dear friend. <3

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  7. Martha Jane OrlandoMay 11, 2012 at 11:22 PM

    I love my silver Scion - very bug-like, too. I can see why you would love to drive this hot little number!
    Great to see you back, Janaki!

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  8. Nikky44May 11, 2012 at 11:54 PM

    A real beauty!!

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  9. ClaudiaMay 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM

    smiles...my first car was a yellow beetle...loved it dearly and drove it for two years until it fell apart...old car but quite the character...smiles

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  10. DavidMay 12, 2012 at 2:57 AM

    A passionate take on your dream machine...Your words take a car and transform it into something erotic and sexy. Good luck on attaining on your dream ride!!

    http://erinsdomain.blogspot.com/2012/05/erins-hooked-on-fishing.html

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  11. Galen PearlMay 12, 2012 at 4:10 AM

    Ha! I used to feel that way about a Ford Mustang!!

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    1. JANUMay 12, 2012 at 8:42 AM

      We do have crush on some machines! Thanks Galen.

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  12. zongrikMay 12, 2012 at 4:43 AM

    but....also...this can be a metaphor for a man, in that, as a modern woman who has intense sexual needs, some of us look at a gorgeous man, and simply see him as a machine, a vibrator attached to human, in other word! a vibrator with 8 pack abs is hot! :)

    sonnet 40

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    1. JANUMay 12, 2012 at 8:44 AM

      Zorgrik- I see car as a car and a man as a man!! And I absolutely adore the Beetle without its 8 pack abs!!! Thanks.

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  13. NelietaMay 12, 2012 at 5:09 AM

    Super-hot...great poem!

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  14. TamekaMay 12, 2012 at 6:56 PM

    Being that I was born in the Motor City (Detroit, Michigan), I can appreciate a lady who has a love for cars. What a handsome fellow. I'm sure he drives very nice. Enjoy the ride! This was fun to read! ;-)

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  15. Rachel HoytMay 12, 2012 at 10:32 PM

    I've always loved that car! It does look fun to drive. :) Great poem.

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  16. AnonymousMay 13, 2012 at 9:30 AM

    That's a lovely colour indeed. :)

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  17. SimranMay 13, 2012 at 8:59 PM

    Love for the Ferrari! :)
    Well expressed

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  18. Manisha BhatiaMay 14, 2012 at 12:26 PM

    Its Ferrari? I believe its BEETLE the cutest headturner on road ;)
    I was awestruck by d beauty n i find it as a female because its more a girly girly car than compared to SUVs whch are muscular...

    O! i wanna own AUDI Q7 one day , damnnnn hot ;)
    Poem was super hot;)

    Love
    Mani

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  19. JessicaMay 15, 2012 at 9:49 AM

    ha! I love it! Great poem...I wouldn't mind taking him out for a test drive. ;)

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  20. IreneMay 17, 2012 at 12:44 PM

    I wrote a post entitled "Love At First Sight" too! Only mine is a dog hehe

    And that car is handsome! :-)

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  21. BikramMay 19, 2012 at 9:10 PM

    Is that a beatle .. I am so bad at cars ... abd beautiful color too RED HOT :)

    came over from Andy sir's blog for the saturday hop..

    Bikram's

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  22. Dangerous LindaMay 21, 2012 at 3:48 AM

    hahaha! that description 'This is one hell-of-a machine
    I want to possess', describing a car that looks like a toy to me, reminds me of a friend I know who talks about her husband that way even though he looks like a little boy -- indeed 'beauty is in the eye of the beholder. love it ;-)

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