Monday, June 17, 2013

BLAME THE RAIN.

 

Do you need a reason 
To cross my mind?
It isn't me,
Blame the rain.
The music of falling rain
Casts its magical spell
Spreading romance in the air
The water drops trickling
Down the window pane
Makes me crave your touch - divine
Playfully teasing my skin
The wet wild wind
Crashes on my senses
Like waves, increase -
My yearning, am so
Defense - less
The air heavy
Like my breathing
Expectant, impatient
For your kiss
For liberation
For salvation.


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29 comments:

  1. Diwakar NarayanJune 17, 2013 at 9:40 AM

    Nice lines, Janaki. The rains and romance have been buddies for ages :)

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    1. JANUJune 17, 2013 at 10:36 PM

      Mine is a never ending love affair with rain n romance. Thanks Diwakar.

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  2. ClaudiaJune 17, 2013 at 9:45 AM

    smiles...maybe the rain can be only blamed partly...smiles...nice tension and longing in here...and a summer rain's music sounds like the perfect background for a passionate kiss..nice...

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    1. JANUJune 17, 2013 at 10:36 PM

      It is everything you have said Claudia...thanks.

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  3. magiceyeJune 17, 2013 at 10:05 AM

    So beautiful!!

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  4. Bhavya NJune 17, 2013 at 10:52 AM

    Oh I know what you're talking about :P The rains do that to me too...

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  5. BlogwatiGJune 17, 2013 at 11:12 AM

    Uffffffffffff, yeh emotions! Someone needs to lock you up in a tower. The rains are turning you into a wild child :P Loved it though!

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    1. JANUJune 17, 2013 at 10:39 PM

      Have always been wild in the rain...thanks BG.

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  6. Tall Girl in Japan June 17, 2013 at 11:59 AM

    The rain is bringing out the romance !

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  7. ShailJune 17, 2013 at 1:56 PM

    Love this. Beautifully penned with the rain playing cupid.

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  8. TruedessaJune 17, 2013 at 4:24 PM

    Ah, this is delightful..makes me want to walk in the rain..it's funny how rain makes us feel romantic at times.

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  9. Anshul GautamJune 17, 2013 at 5:08 PM

    lovely!

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  10. Brian MillerJune 17, 2013 at 6:20 PM

    ah its the rain surely...it is romantic and runs its fingers through our thoughts....ha...nice

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  11. AnonymousJune 17, 2013 at 7:28 PM

    a sweet and romantic poem - beautiful! K

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  12. Privy TriflesJune 17, 2013 at 9:08 PM

    Oh... that is so beautiful and romantic <3

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  13. UnknownJune 17, 2013 at 11:28 PM

    So well portrayed!

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  14. Found In FolsomJune 18, 2013 at 6:00 AM

    So sweet...Sure, rain and romance go together..:)

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  15. AnonymousJune 18, 2013 at 8:42 AM

    Wow... that was tender, sensuous, romantic and so much more :)

    I love the rains as much and your words just encapsulated them so much more :)

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  16. SivaJune 18, 2013 at 11:51 AM

    Very well written...beautiful verses!!

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  17. UnknownJune 20, 2013 at 12:34 PM

    nice one! but here in London, rain is usually a spoil-sport!
    -Portia

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