Wednesday, June 6, 2012

DELVING INWARD...


A raging tempest
An unquenchable thirst
A dry earth
Seeking something?
What am I looking for?
Where will my quest take me?
Where are the pointers?
Going inward
See only chaos and
Confusion,
Seeking...
Searching...
Where is the goal?
Do I need to shed my old skin
To become new
And whole?
How will I know?
I take the help of the masters
Alas! Cannot master me.
Am a sponge,
Soaking in everything
Yet, unmoving.
Discovering myself
Wasn't enough...
The quest continues.......


For - dVerse ~ OpenLinkNight

25 comments:

  1. So beautiful and searching...the quest continues indeed. The words stirred a familiar feeling. Lovely.

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  2. discovering yourself is surely a step in the process and in that we often discover others as well...the quest is never done...and all never known...

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  3. Oh wow, the words are so powerful, they definitely encourage one to delve inward. This was intense, Janaki! :-)

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  4. Ahhh.... the quest to discover ourselves, never ends, does it?
    I like how you express it as needing to shed skin... maybe.
    Very nice writing :)

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  5. Wow, Janu. This feels like something I should have read this morning during my "quiet time." Very powerful reality and well expressed.

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  6. Very beautiful!!!discovering oneself is an ongoing process that never ends, and that is the beauty in it <3

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  7. Self discovery an never ending process... which, to me is kind of encouraging... when I read "Do I need to shed my old skin To become new" I thought about 2nd chances. When my kids do something that gets them in trouble, I talk to them about it and then I ask if they would like a second chance to do it differently.

    thank you for sharing... take care.

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  8. Beautiful.... and searching...

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  9. My dear Janaki,
    Very impress with this one. I have seen another side of you here...you are very deep my friend. You had me thinking of self discovery. Great, great job!!!

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  10. I really like this one, the quest goes on for us all if we are truly honest...this is lovely.

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  11. Nice! dear Janaki,I'd like to have more such poems from you.
    -Posh

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  12. That age-old quest of self-discovery is such a universal theme, and you've presented it in a lovely form. Really liked this!

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  13. Beautiful image and poetry ~ and it makes for a deep reflection. The search is neverending :)

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