Wednesday, May 29, 2013

SO LONG....FAREWELL.

 

He came,
He saw,
He conquered
He left
The exit as quite
as the entrance
Without as much as
A glance
Feelings, time, emotions,
Squandered
Was she sad?
In fact, glad :)


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24 comments:

  1. MaryMay 29, 2013 at 9:55 AM

    Ha, some relationships are meant to be temporary!! And neither is sad to see them end.

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  2. Vandana SharmaMay 29, 2013 at 9:58 AM

    always move ahead in life

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  3. Kajal KapurMay 29, 2013 at 10:45 AM

    No wonder...who does'nt like freedom?

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  4. Shilpa GargMay 29, 2013 at 10:49 AM

    Let go! And move on for that inner peace and happiness!

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  5. BlogwatiGMay 29, 2013 at 1:10 PM

    Ah, the joy of goodbyes, sometimes gladdens the heart. I love the subtle humour in this one. Your poetry is getting really awesome, day by day.

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  6. Afshan ShaikMay 29, 2013 at 1:33 PM

    haha Some times it really feels good when some one leaves but the other times :( The same moment keeps rewinding in mind

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  7. kaykualaMay 29, 2013 at 3:19 PM

    They exceeded their welcome, relatives especially! Young hearts though can count on going through a learning process which may be hurting, sometimes! Nicely Janu!

    Hank

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  8. Anand S UnniMay 29, 2013 at 3:44 PM

    Lovely poem. :)

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  9. Brian MillerMay 29, 2013 at 3:55 PM

    hard to tell the emotions in the moment at times...sometimes goodbye is not a bad thing....but a fresh start....smiles...

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  10. LaTonya BaldwinMay 29, 2013 at 4:12 PM

    ah, only wish the temporary ones left so quietly. :-)

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  11. Laurie KolpMay 29, 2013 at 5:12 PM

    Sometimes goodbyes are like that, yet can still be difficult.

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  12. PanchaliMay 29, 2013 at 10:12 PM

    That was a neat vanishing act, Janu!LOL..Oh, loved this...

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  13. UnknownMay 29, 2013 at 10:34 PM

    I like your turn at the end!

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  14. Privy TriflesMay 29, 2013 at 11:03 PM

    Ha ha :)

    That was superb ending!

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  15. Sherry Blue SkyMay 30, 2013 at 12:03 AM

    I like the ending too....as I commented on Mary's poem, I always add "their loss". And a cackle!

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  16. HelenMay 30, 2013 at 8:49 AM

    I'll second Sherry's 'cackle!'

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  17. Grace Grits and GardeningMay 30, 2013 at 6:08 PM

    lovely!

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  18. alan1704May 30, 2013 at 10:02 PM

    I like this, it made me smile and i think the shortness of the lines told their own story.

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  19. Martha Jane OrlandoMay 31, 2013 at 6:26 AM

    Loved this one! Great, compact use of words which got right to the heart of the matter.
    Blessings, Janu!

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  20. Susan LindquistMay 31, 2013 at 7:41 PM

    Haha! Sounds like she came, saw, enjoyed, and sent him packing in her own clever way!

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  21. UnknownJune 3, 2013 at 8:26 AM

    don't let the door hit you on the ass....

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  22. SaravJune 3, 2013 at 5:52 PM

    Janu, I love that photo! Yes, better to just keep on waving :-) Nicely done!

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  23. AnonymousJune 4, 2013 at 2:22 AM

    I enjoyed this light-hearted piece, nice take on the typically over-dramatized romantic ending.

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  24. Melissa TandocJune 5, 2013 at 3:58 AM

    That really made me laugh... no relationship at all established, possible?

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