Friday, May 31, 2013

WHIMSICAL FEELINGS.

Whimsical (Interpretography)
 
My brain shakes its
Head in disapproval
Doubt glares at me
Heart shuffles on its feet
Wish I could eat my words
Eyes hide...pained
"What have I done?"
Mind jogs...looking for ways
To control the damage
Lips - brave a smile.

I dare and look into his eyes
A light is lit,
Its warmth spreading over me
His playful smile
Caressing mine
My heart lets out a 'whoop'
'Yes,' whispered the brain.

Walking into the seductive night
Hand in hand
Wrapped in silky love - sweet
With stars showering blessings
Wind whipping a tune
Earth wafts in joy
Universe pats itself,
Another job well done.






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13 comments:

  1. brudbergMay 31, 2013 at 7:10 PM

    What a sweet and nice love story... Love a happy end to a whipping tune from the wind. :-)

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  2. Brian MillerMay 31, 2013 at 9:29 PM

    smiles...a job well done for sure....i like the whoop of the heart...there is a nice elation in that....gotta get that heart and mind going the same direction at time as well..

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  3. AnonymousMay 31, 2013 at 11:33 PM

    I'm finding a number of us have chosen to use love poetry for this prompt and it does work well, doesn't it. Especially liked the image of the smile caressing!

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  4. flaubertJune 1, 2013 at 12:19 AM

    What a lovely love poem. You describe exactly how love can feel here.

    Pamela

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  5. UnknownJune 1, 2013 at 4:09 AM

    Such a sweet outcome : )

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  6. Manav SinghiJune 3, 2013 at 7:02 PM

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  7. Melissa TandocJune 5, 2013 at 3:37 AM

    Wow! I love the drama of 'not knowing' in your poetry and how it ends...

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  8. Found In FolsomJune 13, 2013 at 7:06 AM

    I always loved your poems...this one too...

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