Silver sands, moon and the sea,
My idea of tranquility
A hot man, for romance
A place of scenic beauty
Silver sands, moon and the sea
Let's shake a leg or booty
Revel, have fun in esprit.
Shed the layers and inhibition
Let loose your imagination
By the silver sands, moon and the sea
Just have fun! the new decree.
Cha cha cha, Salsa or Jive
Choose your own style
Crash, dive and come alive
By the silver sands, moon and the sea.
For - dVerse Poets
I love it! I can just imagine the whole scene.
ReplyDeletefun! i love the playful way you are always ready to try new things. it adds depth to your creative process and a spark to your romantic notions! thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteha...sounds like a great place, just to let loose, find your dance and just be....and imagination always makes things so much better....smiles....very fun piece...
ReplyDeleteThank you Brian.
DeleteThis is a great poem and certainly makes one feel alive and ready to let loose and be themselves :) Thanks for sharing and have a great weekend!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary.
Deletewhat a great place you're taking us today. very vivid, i'd love to just pack my bags right now and go there.
ReplyDeletebeautifully done.
Nice compliment...thanks.
DeleteThis made me smile and also must have been a fun poem to write. Salsa on...and on!
ReplyDelete:-) thanks Mary.
DeleteVibrancy flowing throughout. The imagery is vivid and I almost put my back out just reading it.
ReplyDeleteHumbled...thanks.
DeleteI think I want to at the silver sands under the moon watching the waves in the sea. I wish I could even dance in the sand, it sounds like a lot of fun. I think my imagination was running a little wild while reading this. I totally enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThanks for trying a new form of poetry using this weeks Theme Thursday prompt. It turned out fantastic. Have a lovely weekend.
God bless.
Thanks for the opportunity...:-)
DeleteVery entertaining - and the first dance/romance quatern I've read. As I explored the form I thought it would be perfect as a dance poem. Well done. Much appreciated!
ReplyDeleteThanks, it was challenging. Thought I was off the mark. Glad you like it.
Deletewas so much fun.. am now dancing away...
ReplyDeleteThanks Lady.
Deleteha nice...compatibility is so important...and oh my...i just wanna turn on some music now, imagine a beach and the sea and dance the night away...
ReplyDeleteDo it...and find a hot man, for romance!
DeleteWell I was dancing along with you..this is so fun ~
ReplyDeleteThanks.
DeleteFun indeed!
ReplyDeleteThanks Laurie.
DeleteA real fun poem :) Salsa ..jive and a hot man for romance ...mmmm :)
ReplyDeleteFun indeed...thanks Sridevi.
Delete...very alluring and fascinating... my pleasure to read.. smiles...
ReplyDeleteThanks Kelvin.
DeleteFEISTY!
ReplyDelete-Poet Desh
Thank you.
DeleteOK, I'm a bit biased towards your poem. It's got the words cha cha cha and salsa in it :-). It's a beautiful piece. Many thanks.
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
Very nice quatern.
ReplyDeleteWOw, great contrast to the blog title!
ReplyDeleteFune -- nicely done
I totally love this.
ReplyDeleteWant me to be transported there - among sand , moon and sea :)