Lines-
Some dark
Some light
Some curved
Some straight
Lines...for foresight.
Grids -
Mishmash of them
Eastings
Northings
Numerical
Precise but confusing.
7 Lines on forehead
Each for a trait
I can count more
They are of age.
Invisible lines joined together
Connects stars
To make constellations
Lines, bent and twisted
Make alphabets
Stringed with others
Gives meaning to our life.
But, the lines I love
Are the ones you trace
On my body,
The straight of my nose,
The curve of my lips
Insight to your feelings,
On the dot...Precise.
Line is when the arrow
Of cupid strikes....
Your senses go haywire!
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Mag 147
The sensuality of lines! Beautiful composition :-)
ReplyDeleteOh my my this was beautifully romantic....<3
ReplyDeleteah love the intimacy and sensuality of this...my fav stanza though is...
ReplyDelete7 Lines on forehead
Each for a trait
I can count more
They are of age
i like that you give them meaning...and acknowledge age as well...smiles.
Love it :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written...
ReplyDeleteThe lines of life....this is beatuiful!
ReplyDelete.. and X marks the spot? This is a lovely poem!!
ReplyDeletelove it ...love it :)) A beautiful mish mash of reflections and pure sensuality :)
ReplyDeleteseeing the picture oooh that would have hurt ..
ReplyDeletebeautiful lines though :)
Bikram's
The picture and words compliment each other...but the last verse is the clincher.
ReplyDelete...an excellent throw at the end... i couldn't agree more...
ReplyDeletesmiles...