Sunday, January 6, 2013

ANTICIPATION.

 

Milky white of her skin - glowing-
In the moon light - seeping
Through the window
The still of the night
Rippled by her breath
And the wild beats of her heart
Eyes dreamy
The smile expectant
As she waits for him. 


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40 comments:

  1. Tess KincaidJanuary 6, 2013 at 9:02 PM

    Lovely...

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  2. Brian MillerJanuary 6, 2013 at 9:42 PM

    the still of the night rippled by her breath...ha...i like that....the wild beats of her heart as well...oh you def caught the anticipation...smiles.

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  3. Laurie KolpJanuary 6, 2013 at 10:32 PM

    ... as I'm sure will be a naughty encounter.

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  4. Privy TriflesJanuary 6, 2013 at 11:18 PM

    Beautifully written...goes so well with the image!

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  5. UnknownJanuary 6, 2013 at 11:20 PM

    Lucky boy :)

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  6. HelenJanuary 7, 2013 at 12:04 AM

    Love the way your blog title and your poem mesh ... lucky husband.

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  7. BikramJanuary 7, 2013 at 1:02 AM

    and he comes riding that white horse in the shining armour :)

    Bikram's

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  8. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerJanuary 7, 2013 at 4:53 AM

    Lovely!

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  9. hyperCRYPTICalJanuary 7, 2013 at 5:48 AM

    Lovely dreamy write - lovely.

    Anna :o]

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  10. 21 WitsJanuary 7, 2013 at 10:32 AM

    Oh heaven's did she give him her address? Lovely!

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  11. Saru SinghalJanuary 7, 2013 at 9:33 PM

    Longing is written from a different perspective. Enjoyed reading it!

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  12. Carrie Van HornJanuary 8, 2013 at 12:59 AM

    A beautiful capturing of a lady in waiting! :-)

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  13. LLM CallingJanuary 8, 2013 at 1:40 AM

    expectant yet.cowed

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  14. J Cosmo NewberyJanuary 8, 2013 at 5:16 PM

    Beautiful!

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  15. kelvin s.m.January 8, 2013 at 8:33 PM

    ...You set a mood of quite a long waiting for that one person without any definite assurance of coming... Great writing...smiles...

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  16. Shikha KaushikJanuary 8, 2013 at 9:56 PM

    lovely . हम हिंदी चिट्ठाकार हैं

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  17. Dangerous LindaJanuary 9, 2013 at 3:38 PM

    this is sort of how i feel waiting for the new moon...

    thank you for fanning my fire ;-*

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  18. BhavanaJanuary 11, 2013 at 10:21 PM

    that is a sensual poem...reminds me of Keats somehow..that way he had written about his girlfriend under the moonlight..except he wrote as a man, and you write as a woman, a woman who is waiting...

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  19. Melissa TandocJanuary 12, 2013 at 4:31 AM

    The image adds to the mystery ~ love the look on her face... it fits well in your poetry ... or is the other way around.

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  20. photos by janJanuary 12, 2013 at 4:35 AM

    Lovely! so very romantic.

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  21. Martha Jane OrlandoJanuary 12, 2013 at 5:13 AM

    Oh, my heart is beating! The mystery and allure of this are priceless, Janu!

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