Saturday, January 5, 2013

MAKE IT COUNT



Do the very thing 
That you fear,
The most - conquer it

Flying high
I dared to look down -
Let it go

It's liberating -
Though short lived moment
Still magnanimous!

For - dVerse Poets 
An attempt at Kelly lune, a 5-3-5 syllabic Haiku and  Collum lune, a 3-5-3 Haiku.
The picture is of me para sailing :) 

15 comments:

  1. A few variations, but the first verse is spot-on. And congratulations on facing your fear, that's a great shot, and what a way to commemorate the moment!

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    1. Thank you so much...it is a challenge to attempt new forms.

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  2. Oh how cool. That must've been awesome. Thanks for sharing and very nicely done with haiku. I love haiku.

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  3. Well done both on facing your fear and on recording the moment for us to share it with you.

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  4. smiles....very nice...facing our fears takes its power over us...oh wow on the parasailing...have yet to do that....

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  5. I do want to feel that "liberating" sensation, at least once. Well penned. :)

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  6. kudos...I can imagine facing such a fear can be liberating and exhilarating. lovely lunes.

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  7. Oh yes.. very true..reminded me of the time I was sitting with legal dangling from a plane at thousands of feet and then throwing myself towards earth..

    The best way to conquer fear is face it..

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    1. Did you really Sky dive??? Wow!

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    2. Oh yes I did :) would love to do it again though.. :)

      http://mannbikram.wordpress.com/2010/10/05/wordless-wednesday-adrenalin-rush/

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  8. Your experience must've been pretty exciting. I first saw images of parasailing from Jim's blog.

    I also love the first haiku :)

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  9. WOW...lovely pic and yes conquering fear is something we all need to learn in life!

    Kudos to you <3

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