Sunday, March 17, 2013

GOING GREEN.

 

He had the most soulful eyes
Seemed a bit lost
I melted faster than ice
Wanted to take him...in my arms
Give his the warmth and
The love he deserved
He walked past me
To her
His love for her unconditional
He, her puppy
And me? Just green with envy.

For - dVerse Poets Pub   

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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 17, 2013 at 11:32 PM

    Ha! Know the feeling! How does it happen? What bad judgment he has! Oh dear. Thanks much for participating with your green poem! k.

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  2. Brian MillerMarch 18, 2013 at 12:14 AM

    oo yeah that can get to be a bit of envy there...when one you pine for is already gone to another...

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  3. ClaudiaMarch 18, 2013 at 12:16 AM

    ha - dogs can have the most soulful eyes... i totally understand that you melted faster than ice...smiles

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  4. Martha Jane OrlandoMarch 18, 2013 at 2:42 AM

    Green! Perfect for St. Patrick's Day.
    Wonderful poem, Janu.
    Blessings!

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  5. Kathy ReedMarch 18, 2013 at 6:51 AM

    ..Love the green nails and lips to emphasize the smart poem;)

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  6. Dangerous LindaMarch 18, 2013 at 7:20 AM

    ahhhh! adorable! love the twist at the end -- hah!

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  7. Red HandedMarch 18, 2013 at 12:09 PM

    He the puppy...and me green with envy...
    Loved the twist u brought!!!

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  8. PurbaMarch 19, 2013 at 5:29 AM

    "Puppy" seems to have many layers :p

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  9. AnonymousMarch 20, 2013 at 3:15 PM

    Puppy love.. :)

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  10. AnonymousMarch 20, 2013 at 9:17 PM

    M a huge fan of Rumi..simply love the poem that you wrote. keep it up:)
    Vishal
    www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com
    vishal-newkidontheblock.blogspot.com

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