Sunday, March 10, 2013

PAUSE, SEE, SAVOUR.

From my window, I see
Colorful splash
Across the sky
The hues, red and pink
Merging
Reminds the blush
Of a girl...shy
A fine evening
So mesmerizing
When the heart 
Wants to sing.
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I smell them
Before I feel
I listen to their
Rhythmic fall on
The leaves of the trees tall
I dance drenched
In the damp wet winds
That the monsoon brings
They nip and I tuck...
 Nature is never boring.      

For - dVerse Poets Pub - InterActions 
         The words I got were - windows, trees, to sing, dance, to listen, mesmerizing, tall, colorful, fine and monsoon.
 

7 comments:

  1. so true..nature is never boring..so much breath-taking beauty...thanks for the capture...I dance drenched
    In the damp wet winds... love this...i dance along... happy sunday to you..

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  2. Ah, you have definitely captured a beautiful scene here with your words! Nature is certainly never boring!

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  3. nature is surely never boring...smiles...and often beautiful..even the most vicious of elements of it...and powerful....lovely imagery janu

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  4. These lines grabbed me:

    "The hues, red and pink
    Merging
    Reminds the blush
    Of a girl...shy"

    So perfect and it gets the mood across beautifully!

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  5. Oh nice, I love the sky being a shy girls blush very calming!

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  6. Such a beautiful poem - loved dancing in the rain! K

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  7. Beautifully written. Love the use of the words you were given, you put them together perfectly.

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