For http://dversepoets.com/2011/09/20/openlinknight-week-10/..........shine on...
Are you angry?
Or don’t you just care?
Playing hide n seek,
Willing me to dare!
Wanna reach up the sky,
And scatter the clouds,
Search through them,
And call you aloud!
Darkness down here,
Flashes of lightening,
And thunder rolling….
Feels like I am drowning.
Let your rays pierce this darkness
Warm this earth with your brightness.
Showers are welcome
After a storm that’s tumultuous
Like after a brief illness
Life feels wondrous!
Your love makes me glow…
Golden rays upon the horizon
And the rainbow below.
The rivers, the trees,
The flower and the bees….
I & nature existing in Harmony,
Make me come alive like a Symphony!
You, a Knight in shining armor,
Power to change my demeanor,
It is me and you, Forever?
Well said, I liked this one a lot.
ReplyDeletenice...i like the power in your words...a confidence that is def alluring...i hope he makes the right decision...strong write...
ReplyDeleteSuch powerful words and so well written I liked this very much thanks for sharing
ReplyDeletehttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/20/the-fait-of-our-lands/#comment-1024
if it s love, it s forever :)
ReplyDeleteThey say that breaking up is hard to do - making up is always better and the sun breaks through. A story that will bring cheer to lovers everywhere. G.
ReplyDeleteAnn LeFlore...thanks.
ReplyDeleteBeachanny...thanks for stopping by.
ReplyDeleteAt first I felt a drift between the subject and her lover, that perhaps he was angry with her or that she was just reading too much into his natural aloofness. But she described her love so beautifully and in the end decided that it didn't make any difference, these feelings she had about him caring or being upset, and that she loves him deeply and sees him as her knight in shining armor. And do you know what? that's hot Janu. There is no greater feeling in this world but for a man to know that hos woman holds his heart in her hands... My experience shows that 99 percent of the rifts between myself and a lover comes from a misunderstanding so it is always powerful to know that the love is there regardless.. lovely poem..
ReplyDeleteThat was beautiful....thanks.
ReplyDeletepassionate words, love the flow.
ReplyDeletesmiles.