Friday, November 30, 2012

WHEN YOU.....

 
Did you notice the change?
When you whisper my name!
Bird song merrier
Sun - Brighter
With a hint of red
As if he blushed!
Flowers bloom
With pride and
A hint of smile
Dancing to a silent tune.
I am the bird,
Sun and flowers....
I am the element
When you whisper my name!     


 G-man

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25 comments:

  1. RimlyNovember 30, 2012 at 2:37 PM

    So very romantic!

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  2. IreneNovember 30, 2012 at 4:08 PM

    Love, love, love... that'll always be the sweetest word <3 :-)

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  3. Brian MillerNovember 30, 2012 at 4:46 PM

    smiles...def romantic....and to uses ones name implies even more intimacy...nice inclusion of bloom as that is what we do in that moment...

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  4. UnknownNovember 30, 2012 at 5:21 PM

    I have been married 20 years. What's this "romance" that you speak of...? lol

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  5. Poet DeshNovember 30, 2012 at 5:29 PM

    Beautiful!
    -Poet Desh

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  6. AnonymousNovember 30, 2012 at 5:43 PM

    Lovely.

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  7. sulekkhaNovember 30, 2012 at 6:05 PM

    Oh La La...Lovely romantic poem, Janaki. Love whispers and reason screams but whom do we listen to?

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  8. PratibhaNovember 30, 2012 at 6:50 PM

    Ahem ahem .. I love this <3

    ladynimue.wordpress.com

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  9. Other MaryNovember 30, 2012 at 9:15 PM

    I'll have some of that please!

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  10. Privy TriflesDecember 1, 2012 at 12:18 AM

    Beautifully romantic <3

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  11. G-ManDecember 1, 2012 at 2:36 AM

    Pssssst....(Janu)
    That my dear was AWESOME!
    Now I wanna kiss somebody
    Loved your romantic 55
    Thanks for playing, thanks for the romance, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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    1. JANUDecember 1, 2012 at 8:27 AM

      LOL...You have that someone by your side....Thanks G-Man.

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  12. MargaretDecember 1, 2012 at 9:51 AM

    Wow... I'm gonna have hi expectations tonight. :)

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  13. deepsDecember 1, 2012 at 12:44 PM

    and who is the other?

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  14. photos by janDecember 1, 2012 at 4:28 PM

    It is 3am and I am so glad I stopped by here. what love is expressed here. lovely words.

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  15. Dave KingDecember 1, 2012 at 4:33 PM

    Superb. Says it all in so few words. Most impressive.

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  16. BikramDecember 2, 2012 at 2:46 PM

    Very romantic. . Bliss. .

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  17. joanneDecember 3, 2012 at 5:17 AM

    truly dreamy and romantic

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