Is it the words that give meaning?
Or is it you?
Meaninglessness makes
Perfect sense
All I have to do
Is look at you.
Your silence
Caresses me, tingles my skin
And seduces me
Eyes that taunt
Dares me connivingly
Feasting on my bashful skin.
Gaze dangerously exciting,
Alights my fire and desires
Your whispers
Rains my senses
Clouding my brain
Cascading down my spine.
Fingers brushing
And stroking the fire
Engulfing and wrapping me-
In your arms,
Imprisoned, I sccumb
To your charm.
Beautiful...I am in love with love and could feel every written word, there. :)
ReplyDeleteOooh! Sensuous. :)
ReplyDeleteLovely and romantic!
ReplyDeleteSensual and hot !
ReplyDeleteYes I like it :)
ReplyDeletePhenoMenon
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Dedicated to ;)
ReplyDeleteIs it my imagination, or is it hot in here? ;)
ReplyDeleteUffo romantic
ReplyDeleteSo far my fav poem of urs ;) !! So who is the heat generator here??;)
That is Erotic stuff !
ReplyDeleteEk to Summer and upar se aap itne hot !!!!
I mean hot poem likhte ho :P :P :P
Hum kare to kya kare ! :P
Nice poem, and I love Corinne's comment! ;)
ReplyDeleteI got your response via email, but strangely, it doesn't show here in the Comments section!
DeleteFrankly, I am quite dense when it comes to 'getting' poetry, and hence my succinct comment! :)
Romantic and HOT!
ReplyDeleteSuper romantic and sensuous. Yeah, really good poetry!
ReplyDeleteRomance! So well written Janaki.
ReplyDeleteAha! That's something! :D
ReplyDeleteUff, yeh emotions! Janu you need to be sent to the North Pole girl. No wonder it is so freaking hot in this city!
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovey, dovey verse, Janu:)
ReplyDeleteQuite romantic .. written well !
ReplyDeleteAmazing how a few words can invoke emotions and memories. Nicely sensuous. Well done!
ReplyDeleteooh la la - very sensual.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful poem. Sheer dedication to love <3
ReplyDeleteWow !! That's beautiful. Now, I feel romantic :)
ReplyDeleteRomance and desire are not easy to write about. You make a mistake and you fall flat on your face. That is why I don't write about those things ever.
ReplyDeleteYou have managed to write about these twin moods in a manner that can make every one of your readers feel a little tingling within. A real sensation for Y. I can see you ending Z on a high!
Very nice!
ReplyDeleteGetting hot in here :)
ReplyDeleteOOOOH ...sensual poetry ,enough to tingle every romantic bone in your body. *applause*
ReplyDeleteVery sensual indeed!!
ReplyDelete**Rains my senses
ReplyDeleteClouding my brain
Cascading down my spine.**
I love these three lines ... very strong and powerful imagery. It balances itself between mental emotions deep felt and strong visceral sensation. Excellent.