“In your light I learn how to love. In your beauty, how to make poems. You dance inside my chest where no-one sees you, but sometimes I do, and that sight becomes this art.”
― Rumi
Sunday, September 16, 2012
A SHORT LOVE STORY....
He came, He saw, Got me hooked.... And tied the knot. (A short love story....going on since 22 years.) For - dVerse Poets Mag 135
Ohh wow it seems to be a real depiction of true love. Ohh I loved the whole prose. "Tied the knot" wow I can't express how good it feels. Thanks for sharing :)
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Loved it - short and sweet!!
ReplyDeleteOhh wow it seems to be a real depiction of true love. Ohh I loved the whole prose. "Tied the knot" wow I can't express how good it feels. Thanks for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteoh yeah, once you get the bite you have to set the hook...dont want them to get away you know...smiles.
ReplyDeleteNautical knot!!
ReplyDeletesmiles...and congrats on 22 years...
ReplyDeleteHahaha - Love it!
ReplyDeleteIn a nutshell! Perfect! :)
ReplyDelete22 years! Lovely....Long may the real story continue.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations, Janu! Short love stories make for long sustenance!
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to the point, but in a way that makes one's imagination fill in all the happy memories that lay beneath the words. Very interesting choice for vehicle here. I like it a lot. Thanks
ReplyDeleteQuite a story, and in a very few words...
ReplyDeleteCongrats on 22 years!
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...and then he sailed away :)
ReplyDelete..oops, didn't see the 22 years. OK, he stayed home :)
ReplyDeleteThe knot is till tied and that is what matters. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteAwesome short story :)
ReplyDeleteSweet. A really short story with a happy ending :)
ReplyDeleteSHORT and SWEET!!! The BEST love stories! Congratulations! ;)
ReplyDeleteThat's the way to do it!:)
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beautifullllllllll and may this story continue for ever always
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