The Light His Action, and the Dark
The Leisure of His will
There is no corner, no dark place
Your love cannot fill
Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
And sings the tune without the words
And never stops-at all -
With grateful memories in a gift....
I wish to stay entrapped forever.
{The lines I have used are from the poems of Emily Dickinson, David G. Kelly, Sheelagh Lennon, Mark R. Slaughter and Anthony Kolos.}
For - dVerse - Centos
g-man
The Leisure of His will
There is no corner, no dark place
Your love cannot fill
Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
And sings the tune without the words
And never stops-at all -
With grateful memories in a gift....
I wish to stay entrapped forever.
{The lines I have used are from the poems of Emily Dickinson, David G. Kelly, Sheelagh Lennon, Mark R. Slaughter and Anthony Kolos.}
For - dVerse - Centos
g-man
Interesting way to re-mix different 'ingredients' to come up with a whole new recipe. ☺
ReplyDeleteThank you Eric.
DeleteI just LOve Cento's
ReplyDeleteOr is it Mento's...:P
Anyway, I loved your 55 Janu Dear
Thanks for playing, thanks for your loyal support, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Thanks G-Man.
DeleteThis is a new concept, Janaki, and you've done a great job of it!
ReplyDeleteThank you Corinne.
DeleteThis is SO CLEVER!!So inspiring and exquisite, Janu!! Great job!!
ReplyDeleteMine is here
Have you a ROCKING AND BLESSED WEEKEND!!!
hugs
shakira
Always admiring my work...thanks Shakira. Hugs.
DeleteSo creative! Fits together perfectly!
ReplyDeletelovely...you did really well with this janu....really like the spreading fingers of love....and wanting to stay entrapped...
ReplyDeleteThank you Brian.
Deletewow...and you made them even rhyme...wonderful flow to this..
ReplyDeleteThanks Claudia...and you should know they are not as easy as they seem.
DeleteInteresting poem!
ReplyDeleteJanu, I enjoyed this cento; a wonderful combining of lines!
ReplyDeleteNice weaving within 55 words to boot ~ Great job here ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Heaven.
Deletevery creative... excellent job!
ReplyDeleteThanks Amy.
DeleteA good selection of sources for this cento, and well woven. Always amazing to see people attempting two challenges at once - good work.
ReplyDeleteThanks Semaphore.
DeleteNice blending of prompts and you pulled it together very well; this is excellent! Nicely done.
ReplyDeletehttp://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2012/09/accept-shadows-centon.html
Thanks SEI.
Deletevery interesting and excellent!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja.
DeleteInteresting remix indeed!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tarang.
DeleteYou weaved a beautiful piece of poetry using their words, Janaki! Love this! Great post! <3 :-)
ReplyDeleteIrene...love and hugs.
Deletevery nice
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