Friday, September 28, 2012

GIFT.

The Light His Action, and the Dark
The Leisure of His will
There is no corner, no dark place
Your love cannot fill
Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
And sings the tune without the words
And never stops-at all -
With grateful memories in a gift....
I wish to stay entrapped forever.

{The lines I have used are from the poems of Emily Dickinson, David G. Kelly, Sheelagh Lennon, Mark R. Slaughter and Anthony Kolos.}

For - dVerse - Centos 
           g-man

30 comments:

  1. Interesting way to re-mix different 'ingredients' to come up with a whole new recipe. ☺

    ReplyDelete
  2. I just LOve Cento's
    Or is it Mento's...:P
    Anyway, I loved your 55 Janu Dear
    Thanks for playing, thanks for your loyal support, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

    ReplyDelete
  3. This is a new concept, Janaki, and you've done a great job of it!

    ReplyDelete
  4. This is SO CLEVER!!So inspiring and exquisite, Janu!! Great job!!
    Mine is here
    Have you a ROCKING AND BLESSED WEEKEND!!!
    hugs
    shakira

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Always admiring my work...thanks Shakira. Hugs.

      Delete
  5. lovely...you did really well with this janu....really like the spreading fingers of love....and wanting to stay entrapped...

    ReplyDelete
  6. wow...and you made them even rhyme...wonderful flow to this..

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Claudia...and you should know they are not as easy as they seem.

      Delete
  7. Janu, I enjoyed this cento; a wonderful combining of lines!

    ReplyDelete
  8. Nice weaving within 55 words to boot ~ Great job here ~

    ReplyDelete
  9. A good selection of sources for this cento, and well woven. Always amazing to see people attempting two challenges at once - good work.

    ReplyDelete
  10. Nice blending of prompts and you pulled it together very well; this is excellent! Nicely done.

    http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2012/09/accept-shadows-centon.html

    ReplyDelete
  11. You weaved a beautiful piece of poetry using their words, Janaki! Love this! Great post! <3 :-)

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for visiting and sharing your thought.