Friday, March 9, 2012

ANY RESPITE?




Juggling from one blog to another
My mind is overloaded
Alphabets floating like feather
Juggling from one blog to another
Poems, Prose, Prosetry...why bother?
Chores are always left unattended
Juggling from one blog to another
End of the day, feels like I’m brain dead!

16 comments:

  1. LOL! It does happen, going brain dead after a point

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  2. haha some days...you are right, and some days you are write, and some days i just need a breather...

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    1. Wonder how you do it all the time? Thanks.

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  3. I don't know how Brian and Claudia and others do it; I love to read others work, but the pressures of the everyday seem to close in and not allow me to peruse the poems and blogs as much as I would like. Yet I'm happy to read this poem that conforms to triolet form and still says so much. Well done.

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  4. haha...i know that feeling..somedays it's just good to walk that path slowly and savor each bite...smiles

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  5. You have just invented a new word... you ready? It's mind bloggling! LOL!! I know how you feel my dear. Sometimes you have to clear the to do list and prioritize. I'm wishing you blissful rest and peace.
    Hugs,
    Leah

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  6. I wouldn't know what to do with the words...incoming - outgoing- hovering -...but time does disappear

    thanks

    Peace ☮

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  7. Truly said Janu! Wonder how others do it. Great use of form!

    Hank

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  8. A freer structure based on the triolet, for sure, but it does work. Thanks for sharing this!

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  9. HAhahaha...this was a perfect presentation we often feel...aah go n take some rest janaki..

    Have a good night sleep...

    Mani

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