“In your light I learn how to love. In your beauty, how to make poems. You dance inside my chest where no-one sees you, but sometimes I do, and that sight becomes this art.”
― Rumi
I keep rereading it and each time it makes me think of something different. Like divorce, a relationship that never got started, to name a few. But also having this strange thought about getting one's hair done and it just falling apart in the rain even though you say no precipitation. That line just makes me think about rain.
And somehow it describes the two colors in the picture just never quite coming together while trying to make a third one.
Great poetry to make one think so many thoughts. Thanks for playing again in this weeks Theme Thursday. Truly a joy to read what you write. See you next week.
<3 you never cease to amaze me.
ReplyDeleteA love that does not work certainly creates broken hearts.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Thanks Mara.
DeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteLove this one! :)
Thanks simmi
DeleteStunning, truly <3
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda.
DeleteBig "like"! :)
ReplyDeletewords beat it all, rocking and shaking the flair of chemistry of understanding.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sancheeta.
DeleteFun, excellent.
ReplyDeleteoo nice little short there...i like...
DeleteThanks Steve and Brian.
DeleteI keep rereading it and each time it makes me think of something different. Like divorce, a relationship that never got started, to name a few. But also having this strange thought about getting one's hair done and it just falling apart in the rain even though you say no precipitation. That line just makes me think about rain.
ReplyDeleteAnd somehow it describes the two colors in the picture just never quite coming together while trying to make a third one.
Great poetry to make one think so many thoughts. Thanks for playing again in this weeks Theme Thursday. Truly a joy to read what you write. See you next week.
God bless.
Wow! This is really smart take on this prompt:)
ReplyDeleteLoved it!
ReplyDeleteHello.
ReplyDeleteThis is the beauty of poetry...there's no right or wrong interpretation.
Like this a lot.
Thanks for sharing.
That was short and powerful Janaki. I loved this one!
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