Wednesday, March 14, 2012

SEASONED BY LOVE.





Like the summer sun
Your smile warms me
A knowing look passes
And I blush.....Like
An autumn leaf
A step forward
And I freeze,
A touch, a brush
Of your lips...
And I shiver,
Shake and fall...
I succumb to our desires
As love rains on.

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29 comments:

  1. Tarang SinhaMarch 14, 2012 at 11:01 AM

    Beautifully romantic! I also liked the image:)

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  2. JANUMarch 14, 2012 at 1:02 PM

    Thanks Tarang.

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  3. UnknownMarch 14, 2012 at 2:41 PM

    Loved it...

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  4. ayalaMarch 14, 2012 at 4:20 PM

    Lovely poem!

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  5. Brian MillerMarch 14, 2012 at 6:52 PM

    nice...that is a good kinda rain you know...smiles....we often think of rain in the negative sense so i like this..

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  6. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 14, 2012 at 9:46 PM

    "as love rains on...." lovely!

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  7. sulekkhaMarch 14, 2012 at 11:34 PM

    beautiful poem, Janaki...

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  8. ClaudiaMarch 14, 2012 at 11:58 PM

    smiles...going through all the emotions...love the touch of nature...nice...

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  9. kaykualaMarch 15, 2012 at 12:16 AM

    This episode of love conquering all. That love moves all and two beings safe with each other. Sounds all too familiar!

    Hank

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  10. NelietaMarch 15, 2012 at 2:42 AM

    Beautiful! I love the last sentence....

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  11. Jyoti MishraMarch 15, 2012 at 5:13 AM

    I succumb to our desires
    As love rains on....
    concluding lines were so good :)

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  12. Jessica MMarch 15, 2012 at 6:59 AM

    Wow...simply beautiful.

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  13. The PoetMarch 15, 2012 at 9:10 AM

    Hello Janu.
    I hope it's a continual downpour (smile).
    Nice image.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  14. SimranMarch 15, 2012 at 6:24 PM

    Its beautiful! :)
    Cute imagination ..

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  15. deepsMarch 15, 2012 at 7:57 PM

    gentle and suave
    hope there wont be thunder shower

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  16. JaniceMarch 16, 2012 at 12:20 AM

    So lovely...

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  17. IreneMarch 16, 2012 at 3:02 AM

    How lovely.

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  18. photos by janMarch 16, 2012 at 11:51 AM

    Beautiful,I love the way you write romance. all you poets have me mush all the time now. I think you are why I amso in love with myhusband more and more on a daily basis. thank you.

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  19. MrsupoleMarch 18, 2012 at 5:21 PM

    Love endures through all the seasons each year. Nothing can be more beautiful.

    Happy Theme Thursday, thanks so much for playing.

    See you next week.

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  20. ElizenaMarch 31, 2012 at 6:31 AM

    Beautifully romantic! Makes me feel like a teenager again, in the first throes of love and passion. Very well done. Be blessed.

    http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/03/in-moonlights-vision.html

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  21. HelenaApril 6, 2012 at 2:35 AM

    All year round love? I'd easily get accustomed to that! Lovely work.

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