Sunday, October 16, 2011

dVerse - POETICS- TABOO SUBJECTS: HOW TO BE FEARLESS AND NOTHING LESS




Kelley Moore of dVerse Poets Pub is providing us this week’s Poetics prompt. She wants us to write about from any of these taboo topics- sex, war/politics or religion.

Here is mine….

ECSTASY
Our eyes locked
In an intimate embrace
The unwavering gaze
Reality but a haze

Senses heightened
Galloping heartbeat
Heaving bosom
As our lips meet

The tongues speak
A language primitive
Driven by the need
That’s so archaic

The hands explore
The hidden treasures
Discarding layers which
Hinder the pleasure

Hypnotised we dance
Instincts take over
Drinking in trance
In abyss we fall over

To rise to our needs
Intoxicating and addictive
You feast on my bud
Sedative-ly seductive

Blinded by the love
Entering the Eden
Reaching peak of rhythm
We b-cum one.
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16 comments:

  1. BongoOctober 16, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    Beautiful...As always...XOXOXOXOXO

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  2. Brian MillerOctober 16, 2011 at 8:28 PM

    you feast on my bud...oo lala...ha, entering eden a garden of many delights....fun play in this....

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  3. ShreyaOctober 16, 2011 at 9:58 PM

    nice read :)

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  4. AnonymousOctober 16, 2011 at 10:37 PM

    Beautiful! Always wonderful words for poetry. Love it Janu. Big hugs.

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  5. Martha Jane OrlandoOctober 16, 2011 at 10:43 PM

    Amazing! I love "blinded by the love, entering the Eden". This is, indeed, a steamy, enthralling poem!

    Blessings!

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  6. Maude LynnOctober 16, 2011 at 10:48 PM

    Sensual write! Beautifully done.

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  7. AnonymousOctober 16, 2011 at 11:29 PM

    b-cum. Very clever. And sensitive, sensual poetry.

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  8. SheilaOctober 16, 2011 at 11:41 PM

    nice play on words in that last line. Hot and steamy taboo of a love making poem here. I like it a lot :)

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  9. MotifsOctober 17, 2011 at 12:13 AM

    very sensual...I love it...a die hard romantic person like me...u moved me.

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  10. ScarletOctober 17, 2011 at 12:24 AM

    enjoyed the sensual ride into the garden of Eden

    nice to meet you at D'verse.

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  11. Sharon Rose ThomasOctober 17, 2011 at 2:18 AM

    A lot like veggies,good word play in this poem. It's hot. Well written and the Garden is sensual.
    Easy to read. I also am a romantic.

    http://seeworldhere.wordpress.com/2011/10/16/our-world-today-they-know/

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  12. JANUOctober 17, 2011 at 8:54 AM

    Shreya, Sonia, Mama Zen, live2write2day, Shiela Moore, Heaven, Sharon Rose.......Thanks all.

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  13. ClaudiaOctober 17, 2011 at 9:36 AM

    hm - the magic of making love and entering that garden...beautiful

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  14. Manisha BhatiaOctober 17, 2011 at 2:02 PM

    Sensuous n romantic!! Loved it!

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  15. AnonymousOctober 18, 2011 at 10:12 PM

    what a creative wordplay on love in forbidden cases.
    well done,

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  16. hyperCRYPTICalOctober 19, 2011 at 1:22 AM

    Cleverly done - magic indeed!

    Anna :o]

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