Friday, October 21, 2011

For dVerse ~ Poets Pub



FormForAll – Etherees, Shape and Concrete Poems dVerse poets


TIME
                     Will you wait for me? Oh,
                          Time, I will as much try
                             Complete my chores 
                                Put my kids to
                                  Sleep, say a
                                     Prayer
                                  And be with 
                                You in a minute
                            Will you wait for me?
                           Time, as I have dreams
                       To conquer,& reach the sky.
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11 comments:

  1. Brian MillerOctober 21, 2011 at 9:27 PM

    so much to do...but sounds like you know your priorities...smiles.

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  2. TamekaOctober 21, 2011 at 9:47 PM

    Making a date with Time is a romantic notion. Expressed so nicely here. I like the design of the post as well. Cheers!

    http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2011/10/lyric-fire-look-at-my-fabulous-life-episode-9-what-goes-up-must-come-down.html

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  3. ClaudiaOctober 21, 2011 at 10:09 PM

    smiles..there should always be enough time to reach the sky together, no matter how busy the day might be..

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  4. SimranOctober 21, 2011 at 10:10 PM

    Beautiful!
    Visiting to you first time and glad to be here..
    Following you !
    And thank you so much for your sweet comments on my blog..

    Take care and keep smiling!

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  5. ShreyaOctober 22, 2011 at 1:33 AM

    :-)

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  6. JANUOctober 22, 2011 at 7:52 AM

    Simran and Shreya...hugs.

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  7. BeachannyOctober 22, 2011 at 8:24 AM

    Lovely moment in time. I'm always intrigued by time as a dimension, about its direction, about whether it's an understandable entity. I want to travel in time, to it and through it. I love the way you crafted words into time and measured, meted and metered it into poetry. Well done!

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  8. SheilaOctober 22, 2011 at 10:15 AM

    love it - those grains of sand slip too quickly to the bottom of the hourglass, dont they?

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  9. kaykualaOctober 22, 2011 at 5:51 PM

    Time and tides wait for no man. But in this instance please wait. There are things to be done!
    Beautifully presented!

    Hank

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  10. Ed PilollaOctober 22, 2011 at 10:32 PM

    i think i have a similar perpetual appointment to spend some time in a minute. very clever.

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  11. Chronicles of IllusionsOctober 23, 2011 at 2:27 AM

    time is bothe enemy and friend to us these days that seem to go so fast

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