For Roy's challenge - http://royd-spiltmilk.blogspot.com/2011/10/lothtm-so-what-up.l
THE FALL OF LEAVES
THE FALL OF LEAVES
Sun kissed yellow
Bright orange
Earthy brown leaves
Fallen from the trees
In a pile they’re gathered
Kids jump on them
Making ’em scatter
They jump up to
Grab the dancing leaves….
Mom gives ‘em pumpkin
To paint for the Halloween
They don’t wanna
Make it scary,
They paint eyes and
A tomato nose
Pin some leaves
To make it goofy.
They run around the yard
Bobbing for apples
Fight with each other
For a piece of truffle.
We eat, we drink,
We dance and play
Kids and grown-ups alike,
We look forward to
This time of the year,
Our annual harvest party
Is a Grand a’fair.



Very sweetly written....I love it!
ReplyDeleteSee you write so nice. Poem lands in the world of imagination. Nicely composed. Loved it :)
ReplyDeleteI love the fall. It is a delight to all. My daughters loved apple picking and cider. Thank you Janu. Bless you! Hugs.
ReplyDeleteThank Shreya....I am learning.
ReplyDeleteSonia...we have different harvest festival in India in January...to write this one, I had to do some reading up in the google...thanks you like it.
ReplyDeletethats welcome winter....
ReplyDeletenice work as ever...
Sweet poem! I especially liked your description of the leaves. :)
ReplyDeleteBlessings!
i am with Martha i love your description of the leaves good poem, i am amaze at how we can make words sing ,the images are great, and you did a great job. god has bless you. thank you for helping make the challenge fun god bless
ReplyDeleteWhat a great poem, bringing up some of my favorite elements of the season I've come to love above all others :) Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThanks all.
ReplyDeleteWe don't really have fall here at all and yet you used your imagination and creativity to conjure up this, Janaki. Well done!
ReplyDeleteVery well done, sweet. You are great with words.
ReplyDeleteJanu, this is lovely! You are such a beautiful writer. This piece makes me long for my childhood home, romping through the leaves with my two sisters...
ReplyDeleteCorinne, Roy, Jessica, Jan and Leah....guys thanks.Glad I could make this work.
ReplyDeleteNice and colorful!!
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