“In your light I learn how to love. In your beauty, how to make poems. You dance inside my chest where no-one sees you, but sometimes I do, and that sight becomes this art.”
― Rumi
Saturday, October 8, 2011
dVerse Poets Pub ~ FORM FOR ALL - HAIKU AND SENRYU
Lovely images and words - I like the subtlety of expression in the 2nd part especially, this novel way of looking at why darkness creeps close... Thank you, I can now look forward (and not with dread) to the next darkness.
Shreya.....thanks n Hugs. Turtlememoir - Glad you like it...my humble attempt, though I haven't followed the technicalities. Liv2write2day...thanks. mjshorts....thanks. Geoff M.Pope - :-) Sonia...hugs.
I really like this one a lot. Very moving. I could feel the dark seeping in.
ReplyDelete:))
ReplyDeletenights are always a tym to long ...
and day light to wait no more...
well put :)
love the feeling in that second one...these play well together...and like the play on longer in the first....
ReplyDeleteThese 6 lines are nice, I want more. ;-) Nice!!
ReplyDeleteLovely images and words - I like the subtlety of expression in the 2nd part especially, this novel way of looking at why darkness creeps close... Thank you, I can now look forward (and not with dread) to the next darkness.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely gorgeous images and accompanying haiku.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed these especially the second one.
ReplyDeleteI'm with turtlememoir...and especially like your “longer / . . . no longer”
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful!
ReplyDeleteShreya.....thanks n Hugs.
ReplyDeleteTurtlememoir - Glad you like it...my humble attempt, though I haven't followed the technicalities.
Liv2write2day...thanks.
mjshorts....thanks.
Geoff M.Pope - :-)
Sonia...hugs.