Sunday, July 29, 2012

ALL GOOD THINGS.....




 Moonlight forces itself through
A barrier of the drapes
As they flutter in the wind
Casting a silvery glow
On your bare skin.

Je respire l`odeur de ton corps
As I open the curtain
For the moonlight to bathe you
Languishing in its magical spell
In its aura it envelopes you


Beads of your perspiration
Glistening like diamonds
I bend down to suck a bead
To think...
What did I do to deserve you?


You look so calm and peaceful
As sigh escapes me
Je serai i poete' et toi poesie
Let this poetry flow
I do not want this magic to end


A lone tear escapes
From the depths of my heart
As I stifle a sob
Qu`est-ce que je ferais sanstoi?


I fee my heart
To be heavy now
While it was flying
With you a moment ago


All good things come to an end
Someday.....
Till then, I will cherish
And, I draw the curtain close.


For - dVerse ~ Logophilia 2


**All the french phrases are taken from the internet.
Je respire l`odeur de ton corps means I breath the smell of your body.
Je serai i poete` et toi poesie means I'll be a poet, and you be my poetry.
Qu`est-ce que je ferais sanstoi? means what would I do without you.






      


19 comments:

  1. Makes me think of two good things at the same time :) I loved the French phrases injected in your poetry :)

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  2. oh nice...the french adds just that wonderful romanticism...and translating it...def some intimacy and heat....really enjoyed this one....the one on being their poetry, wow....great phrase....

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  3. How romantic though it was a sad ending ~ I wish I can speak French ~

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    1. Me too...I don't know French. Thanks Heaven.

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  4. As they say you had me me at oui. Romantic story.

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  5. Oh, I really love this one Janu. It's so romantic, although sad that she has to live on her memory of that hared love but, I love this whole write and, the French just adds that bit more to its sensual, romantic feel.
    Absolutely lovely.
    RYN: I giggled at your family names being that long with adding grand parents in it too....lol We humans are such a funny race aren't we!

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  6. The French enhances your atmosphere and such a beautiful phrase - I am a poet and you my poetry. Smooth, romantic and engaging, very nicely done!

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  7. I am loving this. Amazed by the way you guys write Poems.How do you manage it :D . Awesome!

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  8. The french words seamlessly with this piece. Stunning imagery. I love the ending and the play on light with the imagery. Beautiful. Well done.

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  9. Sultry and romantic . . . the French phrases added such a lyricism.
    Great images, Janu!

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  10. I can see that the moonlight is really forcing :-)

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  11. Beautiful and I love the French phrases that you have added!

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  12. pure longing here, and beauty, and sadness. Loved it.

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  13. My dear Janu,
    Very moving, loving and tender. WOW!!! Very impress with this write my dear. Today, you have become my Poetess...smile.

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  14. Wow soothing like a song..:)
    lOVELY..:d

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