Monday, July 30, 2012

LIBERATE.





He lurks in the dark corners
Himself a dark, shadowy figure
As big as one conceives
Him to be
His has power - black!
He shows up when
You are vulnerable
And, in his eyes
You see yourself, mirrored
Cowering...
Your cataract vision
Creating a pseudo world
Of comfort
But, you are shackled
And you follow him
Like a faithful dog.


In that deathly silence
You hear it...
A voice so tiny
Muffled by his cloak
A whisper
Vibrates through your body
Reverberates your core
Pulsating
Breaking the shackles
Binds fall off
And you SEE....Light!
Its You who has to 
Conquer your fear
Conquer yourself
And, then only will you
Conquer your world. 


For - Mag 128




22 comments:

  1. awesome!!
    came here through Antahpura (FaceBook page)
    malathi S

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  2. dang...this is really good...the second half of that first stanza sets the tension so well...nice release in the second stanza....good stuff janu

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  3. Yes, yes indeed. There is nothing really to fear at all, except the fear we place upon ourselves.
    Powerful writing and great imagery Janu!

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  4. Very dramatic! Strong rhythms too. k.

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  5. Oh, wow! You described those fears and self-doubts so compellingly! And, I loved the hopeful, promising conclusion.
    Blessings, Janu!

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  6. Uplifting message here... lovely take on the prompt.

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  7. The message is strong ~ Very well done ~

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  8. My dear Janu,
    You are on a ROLL!!! This one was powerful and bear the facts in so many different ways. It is also uplifting to me. Very well done again my Nargis.

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  9. So powerful thoughts.....nicely written....

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  10. What a powerful piece. Great Mag. :)

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  11. Oh yes our fears and doubts keep us shackled...but we have to break out and thank God there is a way out!

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  12. Facing one's fears is the only way to get over them. Beautifully expressed.

    Do read my post on the same topic! :)

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  13. A message of hope here - thank you.

    Anna :o]

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