Sunday, July 8, 2012

SPELLS




The heat unbearable
As temperatures rise
My throat goes dry
As I sweat rivers
Under your gaze...
Pure fire of desire
Reflected in them
Sucking me into your vortex
Threatening to sweep us
The inevitable, impending
Storm of our love
I am panting for your touch!
I bloom from your springs
As your hot breath
Chills me to the core
Yet, I melt
As you take me to the
Depths of the ocean
Cold, dark and blue
Raising me to the peak
Brilliant, bright and breathtaking!
Tossed and turned
At your mercy
This sweet torture
Makes me wet
With tears
That rain down
From my eyes
As your tender looks
And touch
Says more than words do.


For - dVerse Poetics

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21 comments:

  1. IreneJuly 8, 2012 at 2:09 PM

    Phew... intense, Janaki! Your words are burning hot! Great, enjoyable read! <3 :-)

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  2. sulekkhaJuly 8, 2012 at 2:57 PM

    Passionate and romantic at the same time, lovely poem.

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  3. JessicaJuly 8, 2012 at 4:26 PM

    Wow...you have such a range of emotions in this poem. Loved it!

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  4. Brian MillerJuly 8, 2012 at 4:28 PM

    smiles....there is some really nice sensuality to your storm....the relief that only comes from a good rain....haha...smiles...nicely done....

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  5. ScarletJuly 8, 2012 at 4:33 PM

    He sure got the eyes to make you swoon ~ Summer heat, whew ~

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  6. MaryJuly 8, 2012 at 4:56 PM

    Beautifully sensual 'hot' write! As Heaven said, "Summer heat, whew!"

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  7. ClaudiaJuly 8, 2012 at 5:30 PM

    oh nice... i def. don't mind these kind of storms... smiles

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  8. AnonymousJuly 8, 2012 at 9:15 PM

    Wow! - this is a different type of storm altogether....you ratchet up the heat line by line in this!

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  9. Martha Jane OrlandoJuly 9, 2012 at 2:20 AM

    So steamy and sensual - wow! Hotter than a heat wave! :)

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  10. The PoetJuly 9, 2012 at 4:21 AM

    My lovely Nargis,
    This will be my personal favorite of your work that I have ever read. Very well written my friend. You had me from start to finish. You held me the same way Nagris held Raj on a stormy, but erotic scented night (smile).

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  11. AnonymousJuly 9, 2012 at 5:05 PM

    yes, really it is 'sweet torture'! Now I realise!!!
    -Portia

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  12. JerlyJuly 10, 2012 at 4:13 PM

    says more than words. Good way to end the poetry

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  13. Melissa TandocJuly 15, 2012 at 3:05 PM

    There are so many words that make me restless :P... spells!

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