Driven to the edge;
Hanging off a cliff!
Butterflies in the stomach
That sinking feeling;
Heaviness in the chest
Laboured breathing;
Heart skipping a beat...
Life has been a roller-coaster ride since we met. Painting my life with myriad colors-
White- the peaceful easy feeling when I am with you;
Red – for the passionate moments;
Blue – when you are away;
Black – the fights!
Pink – for the wonderful sunrise I wake up with you;
Green – for those walks in the woods;
Golden – when I bask in your love;
Silver – for the nights with a sky full of twinkling stars.....
Life couldn’t be more beautiful!
Janaki, your poems are so fresh and breathtakingly genuine that they make me want to read them again and again. Lovely creation, yet again.
ReplyDeleteI love the use of colors here and what they represent in a relationship. Beautifully crafted! :)
ReplyDeleteBlessings, Janu!
it's really a hanging feeling, i just feel like clinging to the poem and read it once again:)
ReplyDeleteJanaki I am so in a romantic mood today and your poem does wonders to my soul
ReplyDeleteA 'Rainbow' of a poem!
ReplyDeleteHello Janu.
ReplyDeleteIt's exciting to be driven to the edge, isn't it?
Wonderful, colorful, breathtaking poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Wishing you all the best in the marathon. I'll be rooting for you & whispering words of encouragement in your ears when the going gets tough! ♥
oooo I like those colors that painted your heart! You are an artist :)
ReplyDeleteawwwww, sweet! XO
ReplyDeleteReally beautiful expression.
ReplyDeleteAww! this s soo sweet...such a beautiful connection f colors n emotions...
ReplyDeleteLove
Mani
Oh my. This is absolutely lovely. I found myself holding my breath.
ReplyDeleteThe visuals are stunning.