Saturday, January 7, 2012

THE WAY YOU ARE!





You don’t like to talk…
I would love to listen to you
You treasure your silence…
I can’t stop chattering
You are calm & in control
There’s a storm raging inside me.
When you say
What you say
You say it beautifully,
Sounds like a song,
Music to my ears,
Beats to my heart…
You don’t have to
Snap your fingers to
Hypnotize me
Nor wave a magic wand
To cast your spell.
You exasperate me
Make me ache and frustrate
I yearn to hear your voice
Want you to share
And show me that you care.
You pull me like a magnet
Rip and tear me apart
Make me cry and
Then smile…
Playing with me
Pulling my strings
I’m a puppet in your hands
Yo-yoing between extreme emotions
I hang on the edge
I fall,
I soar,
I surf and
I drown
Grasping for air
Can’t take it anymore
This pain, like ecstasy
Is choking me,
Making me scream
This longing is
Killing me…
Oh! Save me.
But, then again
You won’t be you
Do not change
You are one of a kind
I love the mystery
That surrounds you!


12 comments:

  1. Janu,this is becoming too much of a coincidence...I have been thinking on these same terms about somebody..and here i read it in your words..I am sending the link of your page..Thanks a lot for this beautiful one.

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  2. Janu what a beautiful portray of emotions. Very well written n expresses....

    Love
    Mani

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  3. @Alpana - Glad we think alike...Your poems reflects my sentiments exactly.

    @Mani - Thanks.

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  4. Hello Janu.
    I love the rhythm & flow of this.
    It's playful & sensual.
    Nicely expressed.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  5. So expressive, I know someone like this, too~
    I loved the ebb n' flow of your words. Sometimes like a wave caressing, another line a tidal surge forming! Well Done~

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  6. Well done...I agree with Ella, "loved the ebb n' flow of your words."

    Beautiful!

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  7. Yes I agree the rhythm of your words, demure to passion so expressive. I love this. I too know someone such as this, a perfect poem.

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  8. nice...one of the best things or alluring things in love is mystery...and we spend so much time trying to dispell it instead of enjoying it...sadly....

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  9. Wow! I feel the emotion and excitement just reading it. Love your ability to create a mood and picture with your words.

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