Friday, November 25, 2011

55 - LET'S PUSH IT, BABY!




Soft music played….
“Come on! Push it,
I can’t feel it…”

Pushing harder,
Sweating profusely
I let out a grunt.

He had a satisfied
Smile…”Come on,
Let’s change over,” he said.

I couldn’t say no,
I shifted,
Now incline, I did push.

He helped me,
At last! I completed two repetitions of “bench press.”

FOR  g-man.

14 comments:

  1. And here I thought you were in labor!!!!

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  2. ha, good for you...smiles at the allusions here...

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  3. Rimly...bench press can be laborious!

    Brian - Thanks.

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  4. I'm thinking this sounds an awful lot like laboring to get words on the page. Loved it :)

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  5. I just Love The Double Entendre.
    Most excellent 55.
    I hope you found this to be challenging, creative, and FUN!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  6. Geez...and here you got me sweating profusely too LOL.I want some more...

    bench press LOL ;)

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  7. Very good! Keep it up! :)

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  8. Portia - I meant it to be naughty!

    Nara- thank you.

    G-man...glad to take up the challenge. Thanks.

    melissa - :-)

    Sonia - thanks.

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  9. Janu...you got me wondering..great way of writing...

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  10. That was a very enticing poetry! Very beautifully expressed

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  11. Hello.
    Smiling...you are extremely naughty!
    Nicely written though.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn

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