Monday, November 21, 2011

MAGPIE TALES - GYPSY GIRLS




It was a ritual. The girl’s day out, the first Sunday of the month. Come what may, it was something none of us wanted to miss, and did not miss until now. It has been a record of sorts – 25 years and still going strong.

“Gypsy Girls” we call ourselves, the six of us. We have been inseparable since our kindergarten. All from the same locality going to the same high school and met up every evening after college.

We have been a family – through thick and thin, hook –ups and break-ups, marriages and funerals, baby showers, baptism…..we are soul sisters and more.

Tara is the only spinster in our group, waiting for her knight in shining armor. To think of it, she has been acting a bit weird since last few meetings; seems there is a guy and love is in the air. Yet, instead of being happy, she seems preoccupied. “There are issues to sort out….it is complicated….not an easy relationship” was all she has hinted.

We let our imaginations take flight when she didn’t show up for our date today. No one missed our date…even if any of us were having labor pains; our date took priority over the delivery of the baby, yes, that thick. How could she? Was she with this guy? Blah, blah, blah… We tried calling her only to find her mobile switched off. We wrapped up our meeting on a sour note and promised to keep each other posted if we heard from Tara.

I was surprised to find Nick’s car parked in the driveway so early in the evening. Wanting to surprise him, I tiptoed into the house and into our bedroom. There she was with Nick in the bed and everything fell into place.


This is a Magpie Tale.

18 comments:

  1. Oh, dear. Complications, indeed...

    Nice, twisty little ending.

    =)

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  2. Oh, ouch! Yu,p that's some complication.

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  3. ugh....deception by one of the group and spouse...yikes...think this one may become a murder mystery really fast...nice build up...

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  4. Goodness...like how you began the write with the innocence of friendship and turned the plot into betrayal...nice work

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  5. Great read, I have lived this very betrayal, I always thought it would make a great book. <3

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  6. Lovely take on the prompt. Loved the twist at the end.

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  7. I don't want that to happen to anyone I care for...

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  8. Janu, you surprised me! I never saw that coming. This was a great short, it pulled me in and wrapped itself around me. Of course now I'm mad at Tara and want to pull her hair out! LOL!
    XO

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  9. Alpana and Leah..thanks for visiting and liking. Of course, I don't want anyone to go through a situation like this...Life!

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  10. Oh I was here last night and eventhough I do not like how it ended, I like the way you wrote this piece and it's shocking finale. I would've cut their heads off *ooppsss...pardon the brutality lol...

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  11. Oh, Well Done! You surprised me and that's not easy to do. Enjoyed this short story of friendship and betrayal...as you said, 'Life'.

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  12. betrayal is never fun

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  13. Great story, with perhaps not such a happy ending for everyone?!

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