Friday, December 16, 2011

IN YOUR LIGHT.




Like a firefly
The glow is from within
Feeling like a
Celestial being
Encompassed in a halo
Colorful aura surrounding.
The colorful stars
Reflecting in the stare
Lights illuminating the streets
Radiating the face.
Is it me, you or the lights?
You change by the Moon
Yet, you changed me
Made me resplendent in love.

FOR - g-man Friday Flash 55
            Write2day
               Thursday Think Tank #78


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19 comments:

  1. sulekkhaDecember 16, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    Enchanting poem, Janaki

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  2. Brian MillerDecember 16, 2011 at 6:07 PM

    smiles...enchanting is a good word for this...to feel that glow from inside, you or another, is a very special thing...

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  3. MotifsDecember 16, 2011 at 6:30 PM

    beautifully written Janu...

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  4. MaryDecember 16, 2011 at 6:50 PM

    Nicely penned!

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  5. AnonymousDecember 16, 2011 at 8:25 PM

    This is a beautiful poem.

    By the way, I love the Rumi poem you have on the top of your blog, under your blog title. I loved it so much that I had to share it on my facebook page. Thank you for both your beautiful poem and the beautiful piece by Rumi. ~Olive Tree http://peaceroad.wordpress.com/2011/12/16/the-unintended-visitor/

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  6. G-ManDecember 16, 2011 at 9:21 PM

    How beautifully written and Positive!
    I loved your 55 Janu.
    You have an excellent command of the English language...Better than most Americans!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  7. JANUDecember 16, 2011 at 9:23 PM

    Thanks guys...
    G-Man :-)

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  8. fantasy in practicalityDecember 16, 2011 at 9:37 PM

    enlightened in love, loving each thoughtful words of passion so intense.

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  9. RimlyDecember 16, 2011 at 9:53 PM

    Beautiful!

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  10. Leah GriffithDecember 16, 2011 at 10:03 PM

    Lovely poem, so beautiful it glows.

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  11. rchDecember 16, 2011 at 11:21 PM

    The whole thing is very beautiful, but those last 3 lines - Killer!

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  12. TamekaDecember 17, 2011 at 12:27 AM

    So sweet and touching! I'd love the compliment of being like a firefly!

    http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2011/12/lyric-fire-my-first-this-moment-post-.html

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  13. Martha Jane OrlandoDecember 17, 2011 at 1:51 AM

    Enchanting and mesmerizing . . .
    Blessings, Janu!

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  14. UnknownDecember 17, 2011 at 4:27 AM

    Wow! Light abounds.

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  15. Manisha BhatiaDecember 17, 2011 at 10:36 AM

    V beautiful janu...His love makes me glow...O! this divine flow.

    Love
    Mani

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  16. AnonymousDecember 17, 2011 at 6:48 PM

    Shinning bright... great words

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  17. AnonymousDecember 17, 2011 at 11:32 PM

    Janu, this is just exquisite, beginning the the quote from Rumi who is the source of so much inspirations. "Is it you, me or the lights?" I suspect a bit of all three. Thank you so much for linking this to Write2Day. Hope to see more of your work. Victoria

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  18. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryDecember 18, 2011 at 3:48 AM

    elegant, heart warming piece.

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  19. Melissa TandocDecember 20, 2011 at 6:34 PM

    Everything around this post is filled with light. I love the image and your words are truly bright! Incredible :)

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