Wednesday, December 28, 2011

VORTEX




Let me sleep on
If this is a dream,
Let me live on
If this is real.

Beauty was never
So beautiful,
Color so colorful,
Light so bright,
Night so painful.

Feels like I am a feather
So light that
I take flight
And soar with delight.

In this season of love
The heart blooms like a flower
Flutters like a fly
Warms up to a smile
Gallops at a thought.

Feels like being sucked
Into the vortex of a
Whirlpool, deep down
A abyss…black out!

Then, being thrown up
Into the eye of a storm
Pulled into a twister
Tossed about and
Free falling again.

Riding the waves of ecstasy
Doped on dopamine
Rocking and reeling
Drowning in passion,
These are the feelings
I never wanna grow out of!

For - dverse Open Link Night Week 24
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14 comments:

  1. BlogNosticsDecember 28, 2011 at 8:54 AM

    Janaki,

    Here, here,
    I never what to out grow those feelings, It is want makes us feel alive : )

    xoxox

    Jessica

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  2. AnonymousDecember 28, 2011 at 9:08 AM

    Those are moments to remember!

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  3. The PoetDecember 28, 2011 at 9:19 AM

    Hello Janu.
    I'm caught up in the whirlpool of ecstasy (smile). Long live life & love!
    Nice imagery.
    Thanks for sharing & visiting. Loved your comment.

    Xanadu: This Lush, Tropical Garden

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  4. AnonymousDecember 28, 2011 at 9:23 AM

    I enjoy those moments and look forward to the time when I find myself in them... Ah but if they could last or.... maybe not....

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  5. Brian MillerDecember 28, 2011 at 9:27 AM

    nice...sounds like someone is having a very good holiday...smiles...love it...need to get me some of that drug...smiles....

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  6. MotifsDecember 28, 2011 at 10:45 AM

    WOW!!! It's not who you are to the world, it's who you are to me. It's not how many times I say I love you... it's how much I really do.....lovely...You do create magic.

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  7. Autumn ElizaDecember 28, 2011 at 4:09 PM

    Nice.
    -Autumn Eliza

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  8. John (@bookdreamer)December 28, 2011 at 4:44 PM

    As they say... I'll have some of what she is having

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  9. JANUDecember 28, 2011 at 4:57 PM

    Thanks everyone.

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  10. Martha Jane OrlandoDecember 28, 2011 at 5:15 PM

    Beautiful! I was absolutely caught up in the vortex with you.
    Blessings, Janu!

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  11. AnonymousDecember 28, 2011 at 6:06 PM

    Wow..good one Janaki! The vortex of passion is very strong! :-)

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  12. AnonymousDecember 28, 2011 at 6:12 PM

    As u took as through this journey I felt I could place myself in the ups and downs of being a mother... Human... Victem.... Lover... Survivor... Writter.... Etc.

    This was excellent and truly loved how it pulled me in!

    ~L
    www.untitledmoments.com

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  13. SheilaDecember 29, 2011 at 1:09 AM

    your writing gives me that vortex feel. nicely done!

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  14. Shashidhar SharmaDecember 29, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    Oh Yes... live the 'now' fully and you make life beautiful I enjoyed this my friend.

    thanks for sharing... Happy New Year My friend. May the year bring you Happiness, Peace, love and prosperity.

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/12/whisper-no-one-is-there-in-living-haiku.html
    At Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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