Monday, December 5, 2011

MOMENTOUS MOMENT.



Can you hear the trumpets?
Can you hear the music?
Or the bells ringing?
Can you see the stars in daylight?
Can you see the world painted red?

Do you see yourself glow?
Do you catch yourself smiling for no reason?
Do you keep humming a song?
Or talk non-stop for no reason?
Spend ions looking at your reflection?

Do you have a beat in your feet?
A song you repeat?
Do you search for some signs?
Or wait for him to say a few lines?
Do you keep talking to yourself?

Isn’t falling in love, crazy?
Making you act a bit tipsy
Head giddy, palms sweaty?
A momentous moment
This Event…
Falling in love the first time!

For - Theme Thursday - Event.
          Poetry Picnic Week 16.


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21 comments:

  1. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryDecember 5, 2011 at 8:03 AM

    love the dancing beat of your words, smiles.

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  2. photos by janDecember 5, 2011 at 8:06 AM

    Oh I love this, written well and so true, perfect "event".

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  3. MotifsDecember 5, 2011 at 10:27 AM

    You know you truly love somebody when they hurt you so badly, but all you can think about it is the times when they made you smile..
    What a nice start to my morning...good one Janu.

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  4. Martha Jane OrlandoDecember 5, 2011 at 5:35 PM

    I'm dancing! Just joyous!
    Blessings!

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  5. Manisha BhatiaDecember 5, 2011 at 6:03 PM

    Oollala!! A cute sweet love poem indeed!!

    Yea yea its love..;)

    Love
    Mani

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  6. AnonymousDecember 5, 2011 at 6:10 PM

    Good one! How rhythemic this love poem is, Janaki!! :-)

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  7. UnknownDecember 5, 2011 at 6:12 PM

    LOVELY!
    -POSH

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  8. UnknownDecember 5, 2011 at 8:00 PM

    What a wonderful poem. I can still remember that first love, even after so many years :)

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  9. KayDecember 5, 2011 at 10:15 PM

    Gee, I feel like that all the time. Wonder what's wrong with me? Great poem! :)

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  10. The PoetDecember 6, 2011 at 5:35 AM

    Hello.
    I love life, love & romance, so for me, everyday is like falling in love for the first time.
    Beautifully penned Janu!
    Thanks for sharing.

    For ref:
    Your Reward Is My Sorrow

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  11. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryDecember 6, 2011 at 8:03 AM

    Thanks for sharing such a gem,
    smiles.

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  12. Brian MillerDecember 6, 2011 at 5:36 PM

    yes it is...it is earth shaking and life changing...but you capture that well...

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  13. JerlyDecember 7, 2011 at 9:40 AM

    well written...and sweet :)

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  14. Charlie ParantDecember 8, 2011 at 4:30 AM

    each time is the first time...nicely written

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  15. AnonymousDecember 8, 2011 at 7:19 AM

    Adorable :)

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  16. Jeannette,December 8, 2011 at 11:15 AM

    beautiful and very realistic! i remember the first time i fell in love...

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  17. Kodjo DeynooDecember 8, 2011 at 4:04 PM

    The word format really went well with the poem, added very much to its beauty

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  18. MrsupoleDecember 8, 2011 at 5:53 PM

    Falling in love for the first time with so many things and people always makes one feel that way. It happens so often that maybe those are some of the most wondrous feelings we can have.

    Such a descriptive poem about love and the best event is falling in love for the first time.

    Thanks for playing in this weeks Theme Thursday. A very eventful poem.

    God bless.

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  19. JinksyDecember 8, 2011 at 10:26 PM

    An event to treasure in any life! *smiles*

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  20. AnonymousDecember 8, 2011 at 11:13 PM

    Oh, what a lovely write! Yes, falling in love is a wonderful event, indeed!

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  21. Kris McCrackenDecember 9, 2011 at 5:08 AM

    What am I to do?

    I can't help it!

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