Thursday, December 15, 2011

THE ROGUE






Well…he is a rogue…
Craving and succumbing
To temptation
For enchanting creations
Craving and drooling
At the delightful sights
Of exquisite beauty.
So bold,
So shameless,
Always eyeing them
And licking the lips
Without a care for
Peoples stare.
So open in his
Admiration…
Feasting with his eyes,
Oh! Yes, he is rouge nevertheless,
He is my sweet tooth…nonetheless.

For - Theme Thursday - "SWEET"
           Thursday Poets Rally
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25 comments:

  1. UnknownDecember 15, 2011 at 1:01 PM

    I thought you were talking about me for a second..
    Feasting here

    A

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  2. JANUDecember 15, 2011 at 1:02 PM

    Alejandro...Oh, you are right, I was talking about you.

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  3. Rahul BhatiaDecember 15, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    The poor sweet tooth...great composition

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  4. Martha Jane OrlandoDecember 15, 2011 at 5:02 PM

    Awesome depiction of the monstrous sweet tooth! Wow!
    Great poem, Janu!

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  5. AnonymousDecember 15, 2011 at 5:08 PM

    Wonderful write. You describe many men with this one!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/14/a-thousand-candles/

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  6. Corinne RodriguesDecember 15, 2011 at 5:10 PM

    Haha...nice one, Janu! Really clever ;)

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  7. sulekkhaDecember 15, 2011 at 5:30 PM

    Anticlimax ;) lovely poem Janaki

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  8. Leah GriffithDecember 15, 2011 at 5:34 PM

    The rogue! I love it. You got me on this one as I thought you were describing someone (or many someones) that I know;) Great writing Janu!!

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  9. The Silver FoxDecember 15, 2011 at 6:17 PM

    I've been accused, at times...

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  10. Brian MillerDecember 15, 2011 at 7:37 PM

    smiles...i guess you can not help yourself eh? got to watch those rogues though...

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  11. JANUDecember 15, 2011 at 7:47 PM

    Thanks a lot everyone...:-)

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  12. JANUDecember 15, 2011 at 8:48 PM

    Leah...it is actually what I had in mind, but added the last line just in case.

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  13. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryDecember 15, 2011 at 9:45 PM

    hot,
    sweet one,
    love the playfulness.

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  14. The PoetDecember 15, 2011 at 11:56 PM

    Hello.
    Janu, your rogue sounds very familiar. I think he might be my naughty twin! (lol)
    Love the creativity of this one. Great image too.
    Thanks for sharing & visiting. I appreciate the comment.

    For ref:
    Firebrand Of The Heart

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  15. ShreyaDecember 16, 2011 at 1:07 AM

    Nice work :) You never fail to inspire me. :) xx

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  16. ChèvrefeuilleDecember 16, 2011 at 2:15 AM

    Admiration ... yes I love this poem I am speechless.

    Happy Rally!

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  17. Larry LewisDecember 16, 2011 at 3:08 AM

    Would i be a rogue with this lead up to christmas that i keep dipping my hand into the chocolate tin

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  18. UnknownDecember 16, 2011 at 7:25 AM

    Great Poem... Gotta love the sweet tooth

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  19. Pokey's PalsDecember 16, 2011 at 10:23 AM

    Ha! That sounds like a naughty tooth! We would get along. :) Great poem.

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  20. JANUDecember 16, 2011 at 10:45 AM

    Thank you....:-)

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  21. MrsupoleDecember 16, 2011 at 6:20 PM

    My sweet tooth is a great rogue and has total control of my body, mind and soul. Oh how I love him, he talks to me all the time and claims to love me above all else. Yes, oh yes, my hips do say and my hands move of their own accord, and that sweet tooth chomps on every sweet treat he can find. Then comes the hate, oh how I hate that sweet tooth. Not much I can do but hate and love, a losing war.

    Such a great poem to describe my worst enemy and so glad you shared it with us on this weeks sweet Theme Thursday. Thanks for playing with us, hope you will play again.

    God bless.

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  22. AnonymousDecember 17, 2011 at 3:19 AM

    Geesh! That was perfect.
    ZQ

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  23. Everyday GoddessDecember 17, 2011 at 5:31 AM

    Very clever - I like it!

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  24. AnonymousDecember 18, 2011 at 10:00 AM

    A clever fun write, nicely done!

    http://wp.me/pPury-9Z

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  25. Melissa TandocDecember 21, 2011 at 5:01 AM

    Oooo Janu...I think this is the second time you've pulled my leg LOL...

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