Wednesday, December 7, 2011

WAR WITH ALIENS.


The UFO landed with a thud
Flashing and blazing lights
Ultrasonic sounds,
Scaring the creatures of the night.
Ultraviolet rays,
Cast everywhere in the quiet,
Unbidden they entered
Unbeknownst to us Earthlings. 
Unbounded they went about 
Uncontrolled in their romping.
This uncanny and uncouth behaviour
Uncalled for....
They needed some underhand tactics
For underrating us.
US forces heavily understaffed
(still majority languishing in the middle east)
A few troops were sent 
To undertake the task of unleashing
Attack on these Aliens.
The Aliens, unsuspecting, were taken aback
By this untimely attack on them.
They were uprooted unsparingly
And the troop triumphed-
Uproariously!

For - ABC Wednesday : U
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24 comments:

  1. Tina´s PicStoryDecember 7, 2011 at 1:38 AM

    nice U-fo :)

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  2. Gigi AnnDecember 7, 2011 at 2:24 AM

    U Used qUite a few U words today in your Unique Story.

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  3. Roger Owen GreenDecember 7, 2011 at 3:39 AM

    NOT an UNHAPPY ending!

    ROG, ABC Wednesday team

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  4. lotusleafDecember 7, 2011 at 6:20 AM

    Understated victory!

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  5. ayalaDecember 7, 2011 at 7:53 AM

    Nice!

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  6. JANUDecember 7, 2011 at 8:44 AM

    Thanks all.

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  7. Brian MillerDecember 7, 2011 at 9:00 AM

    ha...so when is this movie coming out? smiles.

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  8. Corinne RodriguesDecember 7, 2011 at 9:13 AM

    Clever!

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  9. The PoetDecember 7, 2011 at 9:38 AM

    Hello Janu.
    Who'd have thought you could make such a story out of the letter "U"!
    Very clever & creative.
    Thanks for sharing. I appreciate the visit too.

    For ref:
    Under Your Spell

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  10. MotifsDecember 7, 2011 at 9:56 AM

    Well written!!!

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  11. Manisha BhatiaDecember 7, 2011 at 10:04 AM

    O this was quite creative...well done janu!!

    Love
    Mani

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  12. ClaudiaDecember 7, 2011 at 11:41 AM

    ha nice... wondering what would happen if ufos were landing here..nice..

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  13. RimlyDecember 7, 2011 at 2:09 PM

    Cheers to that!!!

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  14. Shashidhar SharmaDecember 7, 2011 at 2:56 PM

    Interesting... the prolific use of word 'U'... and create such a wonderful story...

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/12/whispers-buddha-song.html
    At Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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  15. JennyDecember 7, 2011 at 3:09 PM

    Wow. This is really cool! What an interesting U.

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  16. AnonymousDecember 7, 2011 at 3:23 PM

    Very nice. There were some u-words I didn't know the meaning of, but overall greatly thought. Shared to Twitter.

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  17. UnknownDecember 7, 2011 at 6:05 PM

    A COOL "U".
    -Portia

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  18. Martha Jane OrlandoDecember 7, 2011 at 6:30 PM

    The "U"s have it! Wow, was this ever clever! Isn't "uncouth" a superb word?
    Great job, Janu!
    Blessings!

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  19. sulekkhaDecember 7, 2011 at 7:19 PM

    U are Unbelievable and Unmatched in talent. U rock.

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  20. JANUDecember 7, 2011 at 8:08 PM

    Thank you, thank you....and thank you, all- for visiting and appreciating.

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  21. Chubskulit RoseDecember 8, 2011 at 12:04 AM

    U are a good writer!

    U is for Umbrella, please come and see. Thanks!

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  22. Jessica MDecember 8, 2011 at 2:18 AM

    A sci-fi poem! Unique. Great job :)

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  23. AnonymousDecember 8, 2011 at 7:02 AM

    Ur incredible! :-)

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  24. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryDecember 9, 2011 at 1:56 AM

    u rock.

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