Wednesday, December 14, 2011

VOODOO.




The tiny needles sting
Making me bleed internally
Pain – sweet and bitter
Unexplained.
Wearing my heart
On my sleeve like a charm.
Your love, an amulet;
A holy candle burning bright
Am in trance with
Your spirit within me
Like a poison spreading
Possessing me…
A spell cast by your voodoo.

For - ABC Wednesday "V"
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20 comments:

  1. J.Rylie.CDecember 14, 2011 at 9:29 PM

    Uh-oh, that's scares me hehehe.

    Please inspire me with your comment at my V entry thanks!

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  2. Poets UnitedDecember 14, 2011 at 9:51 PM

    Thank you for joining Poets United. I have added your blog to our blogroll so others can discover you and your wonderful poetry. Poets United is what you make of it so explore, comment often and it will lead to folks doing so in return. We look forward to visiting your blog and reading your poetry.

    Ink runs from the corners of my mouth
    There is no happiness like mine.
    I have been eating poetry.
    ~Mark Strand

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  3. ShreyaDecember 14, 2011 at 11:07 PM

    Nicely expressed. :)

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  4. Roger Owen GreenDecember 14, 2011 at 11:07 PM

    Love as voodoo - sounds about right.
    ROG, ABC Wednesday team

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  5. Maude LynnDecember 15, 2011 at 12:13 AM

    Fabulous write!

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  6. AnonymousDecember 15, 2011 at 12:54 AM

    Short, true and nicely written. Great job.

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  7. ZebaDecember 15, 2011 at 2:06 AM

    Chilling.

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  8. Kim, USADecember 15, 2011 at 2:16 AM

    Oh oh kind of scary!

    ABC Wed

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  9. Martha Jane OrlandoDecember 15, 2011 at 2:53 AM

    Bittersweet, indeed! Your words are as sharp and precise as needles. Just splendid, if a bit scary . . . :)
    Blessings, Janu!

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  10. Denise Covey December 15, 2011 at 3:36 AM

    Hi Janu! Great poem, if scary!

    Letting you know the linky is up at http://romanticfridaywriters.blogspot.com

    Have a great day!

    Denise

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  11. JoyDecember 15, 2011 at 4:22 AM

    Unexplained, not with those words and pictures. Great V choice.
    Joy, ABC Team

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  12. AnonymousDecember 15, 2011 at 8:06 AM

    Scary indeed

    Pheno, ABCW

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  13. Sh@sDecember 15, 2011 at 11:32 AM

    Good one.

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  14. JANUDecember 15, 2011 at 11:45 AM

    Thanks to one and all.

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  15. Lady In ReadDecember 15, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    love the poem.. read a couple of others as well and all wonderful reads

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  16. Rohit_blogger at http://floating-expressions.blogspot.in/December 15, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    nice.was expecting it to be scary reading the title but turned out to be mesmerizing !

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  17. Manisha BhatiaDecember 15, 2011 at 10:12 PM

    O! This is quite different. Janu ur poetry is touching new horizons....just be with the flow!

    Lovely
    Mani!! :)

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  18. DhemzDecember 19, 2011 at 10:20 PM

    ayay! this is a good one....:) sorry for the late visit!

    www.gregdemcydias.com

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  19. AnonymousDecember 20, 2011 at 2:56 AM

    i love it. not many people write about voodoo


    view of desert

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  20. Melissa TandocDecember 21, 2011 at 5:04 AM

    It is scary...hmmm... plus I don't like voodoos, there's something in it... but this also means what you wrote was so intense that I felt it. The bleeding part seems so real...

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