Thursday, February 9, 2012

A` L`amour.




The snake was a ploy, apple a decoy. We don’t need that!
No chocolates, strawberries nor any essential oil, to enhance what is already within.

I am your Aphrodite and you are my Adonis.

You give me that look and I am ready to swoon. Your whispers touch my heart and your words my soul.

In trance, I sway to your tunes. You caress my lips with yours and I melt.

I am the puppet in your hands, the clay you mould, the sculpture you crafted, the melody you set. We dance to this tune of desire to become one soul.

You, my love, are my aphrodisiac who turns me on!

49 comments:

  1. Aphrodisiac :)

    Getting ready for Vaelntines day, I see.

    Joy always,
    Susan

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  2. We dance to this tune of desire to become one soul.

    Oooo loved it...;)

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  3. as trhe 'V-Day' draws near my pulse starts beating faster! I don't want to melt beforehand just in anticipation! And here you add the heat!
    -Posh

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  4. My dear Janu,
    YOUR poetry is my aphrodisiac (smile).
    Love the imagery & flow of this.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Love Has Seeped Into My Heart

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  5. Ahhhh, the enchantment of love. :) Beautiful words. :)

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  6. Great *L* post – such wonderful words & imagery!

    Have a good Alphabe-Thursday,

    Alphabe-Thursday

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  7. Oh my, suddenly it feels a little warm in here!

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  8. Result!! You were talking about me right? :-) Very nicely wrtten -

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  9. oo lala...yes the right person can be quite the aphrodisiac...and all it takes is a stry thought or a look...

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  10. whew! i think i need to open a fan!!!

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  11. Beautiful imagery Janu. My heart is melting just reading this sentiment.

    ......dhole

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  12. Dear Janu,
    I agree with the other commenters. Your text fits the challenge well. So romantic, so true to real attraction; if it's there, it's there!
    Well done!
    Best wishes,
    Anna

    'To Paul and Julia' Anna's RFW challenge No.31

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  13. phwoar! Give me a cold shower!!!
    Lx

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  14. WOW! That's so HOT lovin' you've got going on! Great "L" post!

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  15. Phew! What a beautiful rendering of the aphrodisiac prompt. Like everyone else, I swooned mightily and headed for the shower. You are a master of words.

    Denise

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  16. So sweet. So romantic. Well written.

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  17. "Your whispers touch my heart and your words my soul" That is beautiful. Romantic, that the look in his eye is enough to win you is the stuff seduction is made of.
    Well written.

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  18. Ah, yes. Sweet and apt. The picture you paint is alluring to the eyes, Janu.

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  19. I love this, so sweet and tender. Well done.
    Nancy

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  20. Lovely... Absolutely Lovely...

    You capture the romancce so well with your words...

    Fantastic job.

    Thanks for Linking to the Letter "L"!

    A+

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  21. Hi Janu. Back for my second reading. It would really be appreciated if you could find the time to return the visits of the RFWer writers who visited you. We value each other's comments.

    Denise

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    1. Thanks for the mention, appreciate it. Visited all.

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