“In your light I learn how to love. In your beauty, how to make poems. You dance inside my chest where no-one sees you, but sometimes I do, and that sight becomes this art.” ― Rumi
and what an amazing adventure it was...nice one ~
Thanks Grace.
Beautiful..and I love the picture you chose to accompany it.
thank you Jessica.
smiles...sounds like a lot of fun...and the drowning part can be the best and the spark to start all over again...smiles
I like to get drowned...the sinking feeling...;-)
You make it sound so exciting to be a pelican...A simple life but filled with merriment :)
Not a care in the world...thanks David.
The pain of falling in love. Nice descriptions.
ah love...smiles....love all the action in this...keep falling...every day
:-) thanks Brian.
This is so sweet, even the drowning. It had a lot of feeling. I really liked it.
Thank you Myrna.
Love how you capture in so few words the energy of the bird. Like haiku, opening us up to greater possibilities of understanding.
Wow! Such action-packed words. This poem, indeed, has a great punch!Beautiful!
Thank you Martha.
I'm so gald you turned your yearning into a poem! Always the best way. :)
Thank you Jannie.
i like how this gets to the pointprivate dreamliner
Thank you Zongrik
Lovely!
Thank you ayala.
Thanks Mama.
Ooh I really really love this.
Thank you for visiting and sharing your thought.
and what an amazing adventure it was...nice one ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace.
DeleteBeautiful..and I love the picture you chose to accompany it.
ReplyDeletethank you Jessica.
Deletesmiles...sounds like a lot of fun...and the drowning part can be the best and the spark to start all over again...smiles
ReplyDeleteI like to get drowned...the sinking feeling...;-)
DeleteYou make it sound so exciting to be a pelican...A simple life but filled with merriment :)
ReplyDeleteNot a care in the world...thanks David.
DeleteThe pain of falling in love. Nice descriptions.
ReplyDeleteah love...smiles....love all the action in this...keep falling...every day
ReplyDelete:-) thanks Brian.
DeleteThis is so sweet, even the drowning. It had a lot of feeling. I really liked it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Myrna.
DeleteLove how you capture in so few words the energy of the bird. Like haiku, opening us up to greater possibilities of understanding.
ReplyDeleteWow! Such action-packed words. This poem, indeed, has a great punch!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
Thank you Martha.
DeleteI'm so gald you turned your yearning into a poem! Always the best way. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Jannie.
Deletei like how this gets to the point
ReplyDeleteprivate dreamliner
Thank you Zongrik
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you ayala.
DeleteThanks Mama.
ReplyDeleteOoh I really really love this.
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