Saturday, October 13, 2012

IS THIS POETRY?

 





Challenges are challenging
One has to do is penning
Thoughts are assimilating

Making sense from senseless
My mind becomes so listless
What's Englyn? I'm clueless!

I do come up with something
Struggling, puzzling and piecing
Together, words with meaning.

And I think I have Englyn Milwr...;)
  
For - dVerse 
 





6 comments:

  1. Yes, this is poetry, Janaki! Very clever! I had fun reading it! :-)

    I hope you're having a marvelous weekend! God bless ❤❤❤ :-)

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  2. I love how form can constrain us -- forcing us to pause, think, reform, play. Poetry as mere stream of consciousness seems so lazy and self-important to me.
    I enjoyed you making fun of the constraints of form here, though -- very well done!

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  3. haha form is def not easy...having to find the rhythm...and there are def days that i look at it and just throw my hands up...because poetry to me is freedom....guess i am opposite of sabio...smiles....

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  5. I always admire all who can write like that , use words in such way they say a lot

    I could never do that ..

    Bikram's

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