Sunday, October 28, 2012

THE STORY OF MY EYE.

 


The dark brown eyes
The window to
My inside world
Mirror to my soul
My inner kaliedoscope.
Shadows and bags under them
Courtesy, the over active 
tear glands!
Little lines around them
Gives character-
Of seeing it all?  
Or is it just my thought?

My eyes- like hers...
The left bit smaller
Than the right,
Kinda kind,
Tend to look
Only the good
After overlooking so much.
Talking sometimes
Where the words fail,
Yes, my eyes are like hers
Thou' not in entirity
But, striking similarity
And so they are 
My best asset
My silent outlet.


P.S : The picture is mine and my eyes are like my moms.

 

16 comments:

  1. I must say those a lovely eyes ..

    my regards to your mum

    Bikram's

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    1. Thanks Bikram.
      My mom passed on 5 yrs back.

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  2. smiles...i think my left a bit smaller than my right as well....your mums eyes i take it? it is good to see her in them...a reminder always...smiles...my best silent asset...

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    1. It is a nice reminder indeed.
      Thanks Brian.

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  3. Gorgeous eyes and beautiful detailed description of them, Janu. I loved this!

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  4. A most precious asset and a thing of beauty! Wonderful description and a wonderful verse, Janu!

    Hank

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  5. You have such pretty eyes, Janu! You are beautiful! I loved your description.

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  6. Beautiful eyes and kind ones too - so wonderful that they are like your Mom's - a constant reminder that she is within you. ♥

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  7. oh i like...made me think of my mother's eyes as well...though funnily mine are very different from hers but i see my mom's eyes in my daughter's eyes...and that's way cool

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  8. focusing in one aspect and providing the depth you did in your response was a treat to read. Just love the details you shared here, the tear duct notion is priceless, as I have the same, I once thought it was allergies, may be, but I've never really been bothered by it, so never really looked into the cause. Really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.

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  9. You got such pretty eyes!! ^_^ Loved your poem :) <3

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