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Look beyond the horizon
Do not limit your vision
Break the barriers of fear
Raise yourself above indecision
Listen to your conscious, adhere
And let your heart steer
Close your eyes and let go
Universe makes your path clear
When it is light, feel the glow
Be a river and just flow
Along the way leave some inscription
Be humble at the grandeur and bow!
For - dVerse - Form for all.
Oh, wow! This is so inspiring, Janaki. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank You Martha.
DeleteBeautiful words with positive message!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tarang.
Deletethe river is the perfect allusion to life...i try just to flow and let it flow....like water over rocks...you did really well with the form...
ReplyDeleteGo with the flow Brian. Thanks.
DeleteWell done, and you are one of the very few who were able to link the rubaiyat last stanza to the first stanza's rhyme.
ReplyDeleteVery inspiring message..I like it ~
ReplyDeleteThank you Grace
DeleteImportant theme to write on
ReplyDeleteThanks John.
DeleteDear Janu,
ReplyDeleteKeep that river of creativity flowing...you'll always have my applause! Love this. Thanks for sharing.
Day 6: Forbidden Kisses
Thank Andy.
DeleteThe only boundaries we have are the boundaries we make. May we learn more and more to break through all of them! Much peace and happiness is found at the other side.
ReplyDeleteLoved your poem. :)
Thank you Jessica.
DeleteSo convincing, hopeful... I especially like-
ReplyDeleteWhen it is light, feel the glow
Be a river and just flow
Thanks Laurie.
DeleteBrightened my day with your positive and inspiring poem, thanks.
ReplyDeleteInspiring verse with rhymes that conform to the rubaiyat form. Well done.
ReplyDeleteVery inspiring. Well done.
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