Thursday, April 26, 2012

WORDS.....REMIXED.



How goes the night?
Midnight still has to come.


O mistress mine, where are you roaming? 
O stay and hear, your true love's coming.


The heaven such grace did lend her
That she might admired be.

We have short time to stay, as you,
We have as short a spring
As quick a growth to meet decay
As you or anything,
We die
As your hours do


Long had passed the hour of midnight
Twice ere now had waking infants


After the day there cometh the dark night,
For thou the day be never so long
At last the bells ringeth to evensong.


The prompt is the "Centos"..... a poetic work wholly composed of verses or passages taken from other authors; only disposed in a new form or order.
Here, I have taken from the poems of Helen Waddell, William Shakespeare, Robert Herrick , Sir.R. Winstedt and Stephen Hawes.


Normally, I do separate posts for NaPoWriMo and Blogging from A-To-Z Challenge...but, today, I have time constraint, so clubbing both.


For - NaPoWriMo

          A-To-Z Challenge

21 comments:

  1. Intelligent pairing and complicated work too. Fantastic poem

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  2. As I was reading, some of the verses were sounding familiar to me and at the end I see you did a Centos! Yummy stuff indeed. I loved your arrangement of the greats! :-)

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  3. That cannot have been easy, Janaki. Beautifully done!

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  4. You did an excellent job, Janaki! The interweaving of the lines turned out so beautifully! I love this! <3 :-)

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  5. My beautiful Nargis,
    This is where your TALENT shines!! Outstanding indeed!!! I am very proud of your work here. I am smiling for you with great joy...

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    1. Oh! My Raj Kapoor...it is wonderful to hear such nice compliments from you, thank you.

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  6. Loved what you did! It's like a collage with poetic snips instead of pictures!

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  7. What a neat idea! I love the verses you chose to combine. Great job. :)

    Here's mine...: http://www.ascendingthehills.blogspot.com/2012/04/om-final-poem-for-napowrimo.html

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  8. Nice one janaki, ur skills are polishing day by day..greatano!

    Mani

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  9. Wow! I am truly learning a lot here :) I like the theme that you have chosen for the Centos. How wonderfully made Janaki :)

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  10. ha what an interesting way to build a poem...it has a very classical feel to it...nice

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