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You are in my sighs,
In my empty sights,
You are there in my heavy heart
In every word I craft.
You are there in every fold
Of my bedspread...
Evidence of many sleepness nights.
You are there on my pillow
With eyes unshut
Thinking and feeling low.
You are in my distant look
Searching among the crowd
For the face of you.
For - NaPoWriMO
I was travelling yesterday and so this is officially my post for Day 14.
Seeing with eyes shut is something only love can make us do :)Lovely.
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Thanks Sulekha.
DeleteAwesome...loved the feel :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Deepa.
DeleteNicely written Janaki! But don’t you think that this strict image is not going well with this tender poem? :)
ReplyDeleteMaybe....I thought it was just right, thanks.
DeleteExpresses so beautifully the ache of missing someone we love. Well done! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Martha.
DeleteSearching among the crowd For the face of you.....searching for the one we love..or love itself...Awesome....As always...XOXOXOXO
ReplyDeleteThanks Bonnie
DeleteYou are there in every fold
ReplyDeleteOf my bedspread...
Evidence of many sleepness nights.
Wonderful images!
Thanks Aderine.
DeleteThanks Sweepy
DeleteDear Janu,
ReplyDeleteHow profound is this? Nicely done! Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for liking Andy.
ReplyDeleteThis poem allows you to go into a realm where uncertainty surrounds love and a person's searching. Very well written Janaki! I would be interested to read a second part of this poem because now I am wondering if the 'face of you' was ever found.
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