Monday, April 30, 2012

MOMENTS



I remember the time when I 
Learnt to ride a cycle on my own;


I remember first crush that
Ended and all I did was groan;


I remember myself chasing
my dreams and fracturing my long bone!!!


For - NaPoWriMo



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15 comments:

  1. sulekkhaApril 30, 2012 at 9:16 PM

    First times are bitter-sweet :) Hope your leg is healed completely.

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    1. JANUMay 1, 2012 at 8:56 AM

      The leg is almost healed Sulekha. Thanks.

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  2. Martha Jane OrlandoMay 1, 2012 at 2:15 AM

    Simply put, but says a mouthful about life's memorable moments. :)

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  3. Jessica MMay 1, 2012 at 7:51 AM

    Great last poem in the challenge! I remember my first time riding a bike...Those were the days before helmets! I crashed and bumped my head, blood was everywhere. Gotta love childhood!

    I really enjoyed reading your posts this month. I look forward to many more. :)

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    1. JANUMay 1, 2012 at 8:57 AM

      Thanks so much for the love and support Jessica.

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  4. The PoetMay 1, 2012 at 8:50 AM

    My dearest Janaki,
    You went out with a BANG!! Thank you for all the support this past month. Also, please don't go riding to break any more bones (lol).

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    1. JANUMay 1, 2012 at 8:58 AM

      I will only run...Thanks to you too Andy.

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  5. photos by janMay 1, 2012 at 10:28 AM

    Wonderfully put, great ending...Glad you are healing well...<3

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  6. Erin MaureenMay 1, 2012 at 10:43 AM

    Good ending - certainly something EVERYONE can relate to!!!

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  7. TamekaMay 1, 2012 at 6:22 PM

    Coming of age is often filled with joy and pain. But we learn what our hearts and heads can't take so when we're older we can attract what we really want. Congrats on completing NaPoWriMo! I loved reading your work this month! :-)

    http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2012/04/lyric-fire-napowrimo-2012-day-30-of-30-poems-in-30-days-feed-me-featured-on-nprs-tell-me-more-show-.html

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  8. RathoreMay 2, 2012 at 11:49 AM

    You always rocks Janaki.......If you follow my post I will be greatfull..

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  9. Elvira Lobo(Elli)May 2, 2012 at 1:05 PM

    wonderful...glad to be a new member of your lovely blog:)

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  10. Melissa TandocMay 3, 2012 at 3:05 AM

    Ooo, ouch! Those moments are unforgettable. I do hope you're doing better now Janaki.

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  11. The PoetMay 5, 2012 at 6:51 PM

    My beautiful Nargis,
    Wanted to respond here so you could read my thoughts. Family comes first. Take care of your guests and family. To miss you for one day will only make my heart crave for you for the rest of my life....smile.

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  12. Brian MillerMay 16, 2012 at 11:41 PM

    i am glad to see above that the leg is healing...this is like little snapshots...some good, some maybe not but all a part of the whole picture...

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