What is it that attracts me to you?
As I sit and gape at you....
Is it your lopsided smile?
Or your toothy grin?
The deep throated laughter?
Oh! The things I imagine!!!
Is it your style?
Or the way you hide your
Emotions behind the veil?
Is it your wit...
That has me in splits?
Or the intelligent repartee?
The gestures you make
With your rough hands,
Which is smooth on my skin?
Wait! It must be your heart
Whispering to my soul...
As I try to decipher you,
I realize...
Am enamoured by you!!
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And, I am enamored by this poem! Great one, Janaki!
ReplyDeleteIf you're enamoured you just can't define why ;) or can u ?? :P
ReplyDeleteSo sweeeeeet! Muah!
ReplyDelete-ELLE
I like the way your poem flits from idea to idea. In the end, I suppose it's never just the one thing, but the unique combinations that draw us, one to the other.
ReplyDeleteHello Janu.
ReplyDeleteYour creativity is smoking! Nice one!
Thanks for sharing.
Day 5: Empty Streams
Janaki, I just adore your poem. It's beautiful and sensitive and romantic and....
ReplyDeletehi Janki,
ReplyDeleteThis is really wonderful
pl do post it in your g+
its really empty there
keep posting
best of luck
phil
pl do check my entry
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i am joining