I did not hear the bell ring
Nor was there a gust of wind
No bolt of lightening
The music silent, of the violin.
The Sun appeared on time
Birds welcoming him with their singing
Flowers blooming to his warmth
Sky, clear and blue to charm.
Yet,
My heart sang a melody unknown
Had a bounce in my feet
A silly grin pasted on my face
Cheeks blushed a deep pink....
I felt a presence deep within!!!
For - NaPoWriMo....Day 4
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Did you feel sparkly inside? :) Loved this poem. It has such great energy.
ReplyDeleteDear Janu,
ReplyDeleteI too know this feeling. Simply beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
thank you Andy.
DeleteOh, those blessed moments when one feels at one in joy and peace with all creation. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWhen your world is alright, skies are blue and the Sun is bright.
ReplyDeleteHe is there beside you, holding you close to him, so tight.
Love makes you go bananas :)
lovely
Lovely poem!:)
ReplyDeleteHow blessed are we to feel the presence of either God or an admirer. Both would actually be perfect! Great piece!:-)
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Wow, Janaki, I loved this one. That presence, you could almost fill in the blank with anything. Very intriguing.
ReplyDeleteOh the beautiful feeling of being in love... <3 :-)
ReplyDeleteAh love, what wondrous feeling....<3 beautiful.
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