Wednesday, April 18, 2012

RAIN ON ME.




The dark clouds are rolling in
Oh! I wish they rain on me
The clear blue sky get me
I just wish it rains on me.


The winds rake up gust
Carrying dried leaves and dust
I want it to carry me
Oh! How I wish it rains on me


Birds flying back to the safety
People scurrying back home
A flurry of activity around me
I wish it to rain on me.


There's something pure
Some magic
Romance and pathos
A rhytmn when it pours
I wish it keeps on raining on me.


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  1. The PoetApril 18, 2012 at 8:27 PM

    My precious Janaki,
    After reading your poem I couldn't help but think of Raj Kapoor and Nargis in the rain singing a duet by Lata and Manna Dey. I would love to do this duet with you in the near future (LOL)!!! In any case....you are a talented and beautiful friend of mine.

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    1. JANUApril 19, 2012 at 12:36 PM

      Thanks Andy...I will be honored if you rain dance with me...LOL

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    2. The PoetApril 19, 2012 at 3:15 PM

      My dear Janu,
      I know you can dance like Rekha, but I must warn you, I have more rhythm in my hips than Amitabh, so get your dancing legs better...I'm on my way! LOL ♥

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  2. Erin MaureenApril 18, 2012 at 9:37 PM

    The rain truly is magical - and romantic. It is so nice to see someone looking beyond the "Rainy Days and Mondays always get me down..." mentality!

    I hope it rains today. I hope it pours.

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  3. Martha Jane OrlandoApril 18, 2012 at 9:49 PM

    Singing and dancing in the rain . . . marvelous! :)

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  4. sulekkhaApril 18, 2012 at 10:52 PM

    I love getting wet in the rain :) loved your poem and hope it rains here in Delhi too.

    http://sulekharawat.com/2012/04/18/quietly-going-crazy/

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  5. ClaudiaApril 18, 2012 at 11:27 PM

    there is for sure magic in a warm summer rain...barefoot on the lawn and dancing..i'm in...smiles..

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    1. JANUApril 19, 2012 at 12:40 PM

      Let's us then...Thanks Claudia for joining in.

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  6. AnkithaApril 18, 2012 at 11:30 PM

    Ooooh my god..
    i love every word..:):)
    I agree that it totally wid Andy sir
    reminds me of "pyar hua ikrar hua"

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  7. ayalaApril 19, 2012 at 1:53 AM

    Dancing in the rain...I am there :)

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    1. JANUApril 19, 2012 at 12:41 PM

      Lets have a rain dance party then. Thanks Ayala.

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  8. UnknownApril 19, 2012 at 2:06 AM

    Where's the rain party? I looove rain! If you've ever been in a rainy tropical forest, you would know how beautiful its melody can truly be! And the scent of freshly-wet earth is intoxicating!

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  9. AdrieneApril 19, 2012 at 7:00 AM

    There something about being in the weather that makes me feel alive and your poem brought it to me in a big way. Thanks, Janaki, beautiful!

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    1. Brian MillerApril 19, 2012 at 7:48 AM

      i absolutely love the rain...dancing in it...playing in puddles...so i do not mind a rainy day at all...got a little today actually...

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    2. JANUApril 19, 2012 at 12:45 PM

      Thanks Adriene and Brian.

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  10. photos by janApril 19, 2012 at 11:26 AM

    Oh I love this, I love the rain. Being in the NorthWest of the US I had better...lol, I have a saying "if you wait for it to quit raining , you will never get anything done." I also tell people often that I splash in puddles...Rain is cleansing for the earth and for me. Great lyrics, now just set it to a tune and sing it for us....

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    1. JANUApril 19, 2012 at 12:47 PM

      I have an ear for music...but, someone should compose this for me.Thanks Jan.

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  11. Nikky44April 19, 2012 at 2:50 PM

    Didn't I tell you once before that your poem would make a perfect song? Perfect lyrics for a love song!

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  12. Manisha BhatiaApril 19, 2012 at 3:52 PM

    Beautiful O! I wish it rains on me reallly I jst love rain....

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  13. Mary Hudak-Collins livingthescripture.comApril 19, 2012 at 4:54 PM

    How beautifully written! I can't think of anything more refreshing and relaxing than taking in the fresh scent of rain and having it hit your face while your eyes are closed! Thanks for sharing ☺

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  14. NelietaApril 19, 2012 at 6:40 PM

    Oh Janaki, this is so beautiful. The words roll on my tongue and it is really beautiful! Well done!

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  15. Arvind PasseyApril 19, 2012 at 8:00 PM

    I hope moments rain all good things on you... :) Nice poem!

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