Wednesday, April 25, 2012

SLIGHT GLITCH

The challenge was to write a lipogram/beautiful outlaw/beautiful-in-law. 
I choose lipogram - a poem that explicitly refrains from using certain letters. This is my attempt where I have limited my use of any other vowels other than the 'i'.






Brimming with bliss,
Thriving...
This cryptic writing
I didn't dig
Discipling mind
I go with whim
Finishing with a grin!!!


For - NaPoWriMo



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18 comments:

  1. Martha Jane OrlandoApril 25, 2012 at 5:46 PM

    Wow! You did it! Amazing . . .

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  2. sulekkhaApril 25, 2012 at 6:38 PM

    Colorful and vibrant poem.

    http://sulekharawat.com/2012/04/24/unhinged/

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  3. Dangerous LindaApril 26, 2012 at 6:04 AM

    Hi, Janaki! ~

    Besides the entertainment value, the NaPoWriMo has been very educational for me. For example, I did not know what a lipogram was before today! Well done!!

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    1. JANUApril 26, 2012 at 7:34 PM

      Thanks Linda...it has been educational for me too.

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  4. The PoetApril 26, 2012 at 8:31 AM

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  5. The PoetApril 26, 2012 at 8:32 AM

    Dear Janaki,
    I've never heard of this form of poetry before and looked it up.
    I didn't think it would be possible, but you did it! (lol) Well done!

    Vintage Verses Of Love

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    1. JANUApril 26, 2012 at 7:35 PM

      I too thought I would not be able to...you must see my journal..all scribbled up...but, with bit effort I could. You can too...thanks Raj Kapoor.

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  6. RimlyApril 26, 2012 at 3:17 PM

    Wow! Awesome Janaki. What a feat!

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  7. deepsApril 26, 2012 at 5:49 PM

    thats something like da vinci code...
    now decoding is needed..

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    1. JANUApril 26, 2012 at 7:38 PM

      Nothing of that sort .... just some dedicatedness..:-)

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  8. AnonymousApril 26, 2012 at 7:29 PM

    hmmm.

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  9. JANUApril 26, 2012 at 7:36 PM

    Thank you so much Sylvia. Will visit you soon.

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  10. Jessica MApril 27, 2012 at 9:01 AM

    This seemed like a fun, yet challenging endeavor! You did it seemingly effortlessly. Loved it!

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  11. JANUApril 27, 2012 at 9:33 AM

    Thanks Jessica.

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  12. Melissa TandocMay 3, 2012 at 3:28 AM

    Loved it Janaki! And you have done it very very well :D

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