Friday, April 27, 2012

SOMETHING AMISS.



The pain,
Unyielding
Yearning
For you
The moments 
Only memories
Can I have it back?


None other like you
Irreplaceable
A beacon
You led me
Me a lamb
Followed you
How to reduce this ache?


A void
A crevice deep
A sensation
Numb
Took a piece of  me
When you left...
Come back for my sake.


For - NaPoWriMo







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9 comments:

  1. Nikky44April 27, 2012 at 9:23 PM

    Nothing is harder than a separation :(

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  2. UnknownApril 27, 2012 at 9:25 PM

    poignant... Separation is truly painful...

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  3. Martha Jane OrlandoApril 28, 2012 at 12:22 AM

    Oh, such longing you've expressed here. So touching!

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  4. The PoetApril 28, 2012 at 8:44 PM

    My beautiful Nargis,
    So sorry that I miss this masterpiece. I once said, love will always be tested by the "sword of sorrow". Foolish is the man that could ever walk away from precious you (smile). The second stanza is full of heartfelt emotions. I truly loved it!! Then again, anything from you is beautiful and wrapped in divine love...

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  5. JANUApril 28, 2012 at 10:04 PM

    Oh! My dear Raj Kapoor,
    You have only praise for me.
    Thank you so much for understand my words perfectly.

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  6. AnonymousApril 28, 2012 at 10:29 PM

    I know.

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  7. Melissa TandocMay 3, 2012 at 3:23 AM

    Oh this sounds familiar. How could one take a piece of us and leave? *sigh...

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